Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 82 - Differences in wheat exports over three different areas

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Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 82

Sample Answer 1:
The given line graph compares the wheat exports over three different parts of the world namely Australia, Canada and European Community from 1985 to 1990. As is presented in the graph, the wheat export in Australia decreased over time while the export in Canada and European countries increased with some fluctuations.

According to the graph, around 15 to 20 million tons of wheat was exported to Australia, Canada and European community. This amount decreased slightly in 1986 reaching at around 15 million tons and from that point the export quantity in Australia kept on decreasing and reached just over 10 million tons in 1990. In the mean time, the amount increased sharply in Canada up until 1988 and then there was a quick decline and finally it reached to around 19 million tons in 1990.  Finally the wheat export in European Community increased gradually over the years and reached to over 20 million tons in 1990.

 

Sample Answer 2:
The line graph elucidates the wheat exportation of three regions, namely Canada, Australia and European community from 1985 to 1990. As can be seen, Canada was the leader in wheat trading till 1988 and after that, the European Community became the leading wheat exporter among the given regions.

Initially, in 1985, Canada exported the highest quantity of wheat which was approximately 19 million tonnes. The wheat export in this year by European Community was about 17 million tonnes and finally 15 million tonnes of wheat was traded by Australia in this year. Next year, only Australia managed to export more wheat than the previous year's quantity, while it declined in case of Canada and European Community. In the next two years (1987 and 1988) the amount of wheat exported by Canada rocketed and reached to 25 million tonnes while it was 15 million tonnes for the European Community and far less for Australia.  In 1989, the amount of wheat export by Canada dropped very sharply while it was quite the opposite for the European Community. The final year's export figure shows that European Community shipped just over 20 million tonnes of wheat compared to Canada's just below 20 million tonnes. In this year Australia consigned just over 10 million tonnes of wheat.

[Written by Max Frame]

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+1 # Marinda 2016-03-19 21:42
Could you please give me appraisal for my essay as I am a new IELTS student and I need your help
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+4 # Marinda 2016-03-19 21:10
The supplied line chart illustrates the amount of wheat exports in millions of tons, in consecutive five years from 1985 until 1990 from three areas namely- Australia, Canada and European Community. Overall, the amount of exporting wheat decreased during the first year in Canada and European Community at which point the exports began to increase with some fluctuations. On conversely the amount of wheat that was exported from Australia increased slowly and then it fell steadily.

The Canadian exports in 1985 was around 17 million tons, from this point the amount of exporting wheat grew steadily till 1988. Moreover there was upward trend till 1990 in wheat export. In 1985 there was a slow decrease in the amount of wheat export from European Community from just less than 20 million tons to around 17 million tons. The amount of exports rose and peaked at 25 million tons in 1988 accompanied by rapid decrease by around 11 million tons in 1989 and the amount of exports began to rise sharply in 1990. From 1986 there was a gradual decrease in the amount of Australian exports and plateaued at 11 million tons in 1989 and 1990.
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+4 # Mohsen 2015-11-01 17:30
The given chart compares the amount of wheat exports in three various regions namely Australia, Canada and European community during 5 years between 1985 and 1990 in on millions tons.

As is presented as a census of a perusal Australia, Canada and European community exported 15,17 and 19 million tons wheat initially in 1985 respectively. The volume of Australian export increased a little in 1986 and after that this volume declined steadily with a gentle slope and reached to 11 million tons in 1990 as nadir. Canada’s wheat export in comparison was less in 1986 but this volume swelled up rapidly and received to 25million as summit in 1988 and suddenly plunged till 1989 and rebound to close 20 million in 1990. In similar fashion, initial wheat export in European community decreased negligibly and oscillated near 15 million tons until 1988. After that it lunged remarkably and reached 22 in 1990.

In summary European community progressed better in terms of wheat export during these time and had the minimum fluctuation but Canada exported the highest quantity of wheat in 1988 which was 25 million tons.
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+1 # Nima 2015-08-13 12:25
The given chart depicts amount of wheat exports in three different spheres namely Australia, Canada and European community between 1985 and 1990.

As is presented as a census of a perusal in the provided illustration, in 1985 these amounts were 19, 17 and 15 million for Canada, European community and Australia respectively. These proportions decreased for Canada and European community in 1986 but the ratio for Australia increased. After that the portion of Australia declined and reached to 11 million in 1990. Canada had two big fluctuations first it swelled up rapidly and met 25 million as summit in 1988 and second it plunged to under 15 million in one year and then rocketed on and received to 19 million in 1990. In other scenario for European community it was almost same without any noticeable vibration until 1988 but after that its ratio grew up and achieve 22 million of tones in 1990.

In summery Canada had the most changes in those years and exported maximum amount of wheat between other regions in 1988 and Australia produced minimum between other in 1990
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