Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 89 - The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan

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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

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Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 89


Model Answer 1:
The given line graph compares the proportion of unemployed people in the US and Japan through the period from March 1993 to March 1999. It is obvious that the unemployment rates of these two countries changed oppositely.

The percentage of the US tended to decrease over the years. However, at the same time, unfortunately, Japan witnessed the rapid growth in the rates. Nevertheless, in 1999, both nations almost had the same percentage, which means the lowest figures of the US were equal to the highest ones of Japan.

In March 1993, the proportion of unemployment in the US was a bit off 7% whereas that of Japan was about 2.5%. It was marked in 1998 when Japan's rate reached the highest point of approximately 5.2%. The contradiction happened to the US: its rate went to the lowest of 4.8%.

Although the processes of figures changing of these countries were totally opposite, the last numbers, amazingly, turned out to be extremely close. In March 1999, the rates of unemployment of the US and Japan stood still at about 5.1% and 4.9% respectively.

[ Written by - Ha Nguyen Nguyen ]

Sample Answer 2:
The given graph compares the unemployment rates in Japan and the USA from 1993 to 1999. As is observed from the given graph, initially in 1993, USA has a higher unemployment rate than it was in Japan but in few years, the USA managed to control this rate and got in a better position that Japan.

According to the line graphs, the unemployment rate in USA was over 7% in 1993 and over time this rate kept on decreasing. Finally in 1999, the unemployment rate in the USA decreased to just over 4.5% which shows the improvement the USA had been able to achieve. On the contrary, in 1993, Japan had about 2% unemployment rate but that kept on increasing over the year and after 6 years it reached to over 4.5%. Japanese job market showed a completely opposite trend than the USA job market.
In summary, the USA managed to control the unemployment rate better than Japan did for the given period though initially Japan had less unemployment problem than the USA.  

Sample Answer 3:
The given line graph compares the unemployment rate in two countries: US and Japan from 1993 to 1999. As is observed from given graph, initially unemployment rate in US was much higher than it was in Japan. But after a specific gap of years US managed to resolve the problem of crucial unemployment. Interestingly, after few years unemployment rate in Japan magnified significantly.
    
As is presented in above line graph, it can be seen clearly, in 1993 unemployment rate in US was exactly 7.0 percent and after period of six years it slumped to approximately 4.5 percent in 1999. On contrary, in 1993 Japan was full of prosperity and its unemployment rate was around 2.5 percent. Unfortunately, after six years situation changed completely and unemployment rate in Japan surged over 4.5 percent respectively. Interestingly, Japan job market showed opposite trend than US job market.
   
Ultimately, US managed to overcome the problematic situation of unemployment in 1999. Apart from this unemployment in Japan kept on soaring year by year and reached at 4.5 percent in 1999. Finally unemployment issue of Japan became severe compared to the USA.

[ Written by -  Faisal Ali ]
 

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-1 # Ceren 2016-03-16 11:21
The line graph compares changes of unemployment scenario in the USA and Japan from 1993 to 1999. Overall, the chart indicates that proportion of unemployment in the USA decreased at the end of the period and the proportion of unemployment increased in Japan.

It is observed that the unemployment rates of these two countries changed oppositely. Between 1993 and 1997, US unemployment rate showed a downward fluctuation, whereas unemployment rates in Japan indicated an upward fluctuation. In March 1993, US had 7 percent unemployment rate in comparison with about 2.5 per cent in Japan. There was a rapid decline in the USA unemployment rates between 1993 and 1995, from 7 per cent to just over 5.5 per cent. From 1995 until the end of the period, the percentage of unemployment decreased slightly and it reached approximately 4 per cent in the USA. The percentage of unemployment in Japan started at about 2.5 per cent and that rose steadily above 4 per cent. At the end of the period, it peaked at over 4.5 percent.

Though initially unemployment rate was higher in the USA than that of Japan, the USA managed to decreased this rate while it was opposite for the unemployment scenario in Japan.
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0 # Nazim 2016-01-05 15:23
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-1 # nima 2015-08-17 10:34
The presented graph compares two trends of unemployment rates in the US and Japan in March 1993 and March 1999.
As is presented as a census of a perusal the given illustration shows US and Japan had 7% and 2.3% unemployment respectively at first in 1993. The US unemployment decreased after 1993 and plunged until 1995 and met 5.3%. After that year unemployment rate increased 0.5% between 1995 and 1996. The subtractive flow continued in 1996 and declined unemployment rate and received 4.1% as nadir in 1999. In other distinctive scenario the idle rate grew until 1996. Its amount fluctuated very little and was almost stable until 1998 in 3.3 and 3.5 range. After 1998 its volume swelled up rapidly until 4.8% as summit of unemployment rate in Japan.
In summary, two countries had different behaviors and followed various trend and also in March 1993 Japan had minimum amount of unemployment rate and US had the maximum but this scenario changed over time.
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0 # Rony 2015-03-10 21:54
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