Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 91 - The chart below show the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia

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The chart below show the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

» You should write at least 150 words.

Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 91

Sample Answer 1:
The given illustration depicts the post-graduation qualification of Australian male and female in 1999. As is observed, female were more in numbers in case of undergraduate diploma and bachelor degree while male outnumbered female in all other levels.  

In this chart, almost 90% of males are having the skilled vocational diploma, while only approximately 10% of females are having the same qualifications. In contrast, nearly 70% of women obtain the qualifications of undergraduate diploma, which the number is twice larger than the number in males. However, the percentages of females and males who graduate from universities are similar, which are around 55% and 45%, respectively. After getting a degree or diploma in theuniversities or colleges, it seems that males prefer to keep enhancing their knowledge or skills in schools. The chart also indicates that no matter postgraduate diploma or master’s degree, more males are likely to study for. Near 70% of males are holding the postgraduate diploma and 60% men graduated from graduate programs. For females, only 30% have already studied for obtaining the qualification of postgraduate diploma. For the master’s degree, 40% of women already hold the qualifications.

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Sample Answer 2:
The given bar graph compares the male and female post-school degree qualified persons in Australia for the year 1999. As is presented in the graph, more male achieved their post-school degrees in skilled vocational diploma, Masters Degree, Postgraduate Diploma than female while more female achieved Undergraduate Diploma and Bachelor Degree than their male counterpart.

According to the data given in the chart, Australian male and female who achieved their post-school degrees in 1999 were classified in five categories. Female pot-school qualified surpassed the male in Undergraduate Diploma, Bachelor’s Diploma and in Undergraduate Diploma the percentage of female was 70% compared to the only 35% male. Male were predominating in percentage for the Master’s degree, Postgraduate Diploma and Skilled Vocational Diploma. 90% male completed skilled vocational diploma and remaining 10% was female.

In summary, male completed Vocational Diploma, Postgraduate Diploma and Masters degree more than female did and female outnumbered the male in Undergraduate Diploma, and Bachelor Diploma. Though more female completed their Bachelor Degree, the percentage decreased in Masters Degree level where 60% male completed it.

Sample Answer 3:
The bar chart compares data of five different levels of educational attainment among men and women living in Australia in the year 1999. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that three out of five levels of post graduate education was mostly attended by men namely; post-graduate diploma, skilled vocational diploma and masters degree.

As can be seen from the given data, on the other hand those who had post graduate diploma were dominated by women with figures of 70% which doubled the number of men in that category. Moreover, half of those who finished bachelors degree were also females with just over 5 % ahead of males. Another highlight of the graph, is that there was a remarkable number of men,90%, who took up skilled vocational diploma course which left women to only just a tenth.

As a whole, it is clear in the graph that there was an average of nearly half of the Australian men and women population, held a certain post school qualification in the period in question.

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0 # Sharik 2016-08-06 17:26
It's pretty good but you don't have to add your personal opinions, just discuss according to given information.
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+3 # Ika Utami Wahyu 2015-12-24 11:06
The bar chart compares the percentage of male and female Australian graduates from the different stages of higher education in Australia in 1999.

It is clear that after finishing early education, Australian male and female could enter five different levels of post-school qualifications. Indeed, the proportion of females who graduated from ‘Undergraduate Diploma’ and ‘Bachelor’s degree’ was much higher, opposing the men who exceeded woman in other levels of higher educations.

In 1969, the vast majority of women experienced undergraduate diploma (70%) in comparison with the men proportion (around 35%). The number of women undergraduate diploma holders was almost two times higher than that of men. However, proportion of men who completed their education in skilled vocational diploma was 90%, nine times higher than that of women (10%).

The graduated men also enjoyed two higher levels of education namely: postgraduate diploma and master’s degree. In these two levels of education female were 40% and 20% less compared to their male counterpart. Finally 60% male Australian completed their master’s degree while only 40% female did so.
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+2 # Ali 2015-11-18 12:15
The given bar chart compares the 5 various levels of post-school academic qualifications of Australian male and female in 1999. Looking at the details, more Australian males had vocational diploma and post-graduation qualification than that of their female counterpart.

As is presented as a census of a perusal, 90% of skilled vocational diploma holders were male while only 10% were female in Australia in 1999. Among undergraduate diploma and bachelor degree holders, proportions of women were higher than men. In upper academic degrees, the proportion of men were comparatively higher than women. For instance, 70% postgraduate diploma holders were men whereas only 30% of women earned this educational qualification. Finally, 60% masters degree was for men while it was 40% for female.

In summary, male in post-school academic qualification outweighed the female as they earned more higher-degrees than that of Australian females. However, female in Australia in 1999 got more undergraduate diploma than their male counterpart.
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0 # Rohit Daal 2016-09-11 18:45
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0 # Jesua 2016-11-17 02:33
Quoting Rohit Daal:
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0 # M.h. Refat 2015-10-11 18:50
Thanks, it helps me to find a good idea and I have got some new word from it. Probably, I'm going to use those word when I will get an opportunity.
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