Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 95 - USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.

Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 95

 

Sample Answer 1:
The first chart illustrates the change in the number of marriages and divorces in the US over a 30-year period from 1970. The second chart compares the proportion of American adults’ different marital statuses in two years, 1970 and 2000.

Overall, there was a clear downward trend of people getting married in the US. Although a majority of adult Americans were married in both recorded years, there was a quite higher percentage of people staying single in 2000.

From 1970 to 1980, 2.5 million marriages were registered in America; however, this number gradually decreased to 2 million by the year 2000. In contrast, the number of divorces filed was around 1 million in 1970 and then reached a peak at almost 1.5 million a decade later. There had been since then less divorces and the figure fell back to 1 million in 2000, exactly 50% of that of the marriages in the same year.

The percentage of married American adults dropped from 70% in 1970 to around 60% in 2000. Similarly, there was a marginal decrease in the proportion of widowed people. The figures for never married people and divorced ones experienced a slight rise, by around 8% for each category.

[ written by - Quinn ]

Sample Answer 2:
The given bar graphs show data on the marriage and divorce rate in the USA from 1970 to 2000 and also show the marital statuses of the US citizens in these two years.

According to the first bat graph, the marriage rate in 1970 & 1980 was 2.5 million and this rate decreased to 2 million in the year 2000. On the contrary, the divorce rate in the USA was 1 million in 1970 and this rate increased to almost 1.5 million in 1980 and after that it kept decreased to around 1 million again in the year 2000.

From the second graph, we can observe that in 1970 70% of adults were married while less than 15% never got married. The percenatges of widowed and divorced people were less than 10% in this year. After 30 years, in 2000, the percentages of married population decreased by 10% and the percentage of people who either never got married or got divorced increased. 

Sample Answer 3:
The provided charts compare the rate of marriage and divorce and marital status of adults Americans between 1970 and 2000.

As can be observed, marriage in 1970 and 1980 remained unchanged, but after that it started falling. In 1970 and 1980, there were 2.5 million marriages, equally. However, it decreased to almost 2.3 million in 1990 and 2 million in 2000 respectively. Lowest divorce rate was recorded in 1970 and 2000 with 1 million marriages in both years. Highest divorce (1.4 million) occurred in 1990, which decreased significantly to 1.1 million in 1990.

It is noticeable that, in 1970, highest proportions of adult Americans, precisely 70%, were married. On the other hand, 59% were married in 2000. Lowest divorce percentage was recorded at 2% and 8% in 1970 and 2000 respectively in both years. Overall, number of people getting married had decreased with increased divorced rate in 2000 in the USA.

[ written by - Vivek Sharma Dhakal ]

Sample Answer 4:
The given bar graphs show information about marriage and divorce rate of USA from 1970 to 2000 and also illustrate marital status in two years 1970 and 2000.

According to the first bar graph, as it can be seen clearly, initially marriage rate of USA was 2.5 million in year 1970 which remained constant after one decade and started receding slightly afterwards. Total marriage rate in USA remained exactly 2 million in year 2000 respectively.

On contrary, as is observed from bar chart, in 1970 divorce rate was one million which magnified to 1.4 million after a decade but again dropping trend can be seen. And finally divorce rate slumped to one million which was its initial state.

On the other hand, as is presented in another bar graph, in 1970 total adult people were married by 70% while 15 % never got married. Widowed and divorced status remained just under 10% in 1970 which dropped to 3% approximately in year 2000. Divorce status increased but remained under 10% but very close to 10%.

[ Written by - Faisal Ali ]

 

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+2 # Hadi Hosseini 2016-06-03 15:56
The bar graphs show different marital status and number of marriages and divorces in the USA in a 40-year period of 1970 till 2000. The first bar graph ‎is an account of marriage versus divorce rate, whereas the second bar graph provides information on ‎different marital status among Americans.‎

Overall, the number of marriage cases has always exceeded that of divorce cases in the years 1970 to 2000. ‎The figures related to the first two decades show the same number of marriage cases, 2.5 million, while ‎there has been a decline to 2.3 million and 2 million in 1990s and 2000, respectively. Furthermore, while the ‎divorce cases has always been fewer than marriage, there was a noticeable increase in the number of ‎American couples who got divorced in 1980, roughly 1.4 million cases.‎

In addition, the second bar graph compares the percentage of American marital status of 1970 and 2000. The ‎percentage of single, widowed, and divorced were almost below 20%. The most significant information ‎presented here, however, is the relatively high percentage of marriage in both 1970 and 2000, 70% and 60% ‎respectively.‎

In conclusion, the number of Americans who married during 1970-2000 exceeded that of those who ‎experienced a divorce. Besides, both 1970 and 2000 were significant years in terms of marriage cases, with a ‎slightly higher rate in 1970.‎
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+4 # Marinda 2016-03-18 16:01
The first bar graph illustrates the number of marriages and divorces in the USA in million between 1970 and 2000 while the second bar graph shows the percentage of marital status of adults in the USA in two years- 1970 and 2000. Overall, the percentage of married people in 1970 was higher than the rate in 2000 and in later two decades the number of marriages in the USA decreased.

The percentage of divorced people in 2000 increased dramatically than that of 1970. In 1970 the number of married people was 2.5 million which represented 70% of adult American. This amount declined dramatically during the next three decades by 10% to become 60%. In addition the unmarried people represented a big portion of adult Americans which was 20% of total adults and it rose in 2000 by around 5%. On the other hand the percentage of widowed decreased in 2000 by approximately 1% during the thirty years. People who never married and were divorced increased in number in the year 2000.
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+1 # Rae 2015-01-02 13:09
These are genuinely impressive ideas about IELTS.
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