Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 109 - The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.

Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 109

Sample Answer:
The given bar graph gives data on the aged population of United Kingdom for the year 1985 and also gives the projection for the year 2035.

As is observed from the given data, there were around 10% to 15% aged people who were more than 65 years old in 1985 in England, Wales, Scotland, Northern Ireland and UK. Among these countries that forms the United Kingdom, highest percentage of those aged people were in Wales amounting about 16% and the lowest percentage was in Northern Ireland which was about 12%.

The bar graph also shows the projection of the aged people in those countries and according to the projection, there would be a mentionable increase in the percentage of those aged people in 2035. The population over 65 years old would be around 25% and that represents the improvement of the life span of people in these countries.  Wales would have the highest percentage of aged people among the given country which would be around 27%.

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0 # JA 2016-08-11 10:55
The given bar chart shows the percentage of older people, aged 65 years and above, in the UK in 1985 and the projected number of this age group in 2035. As is observed from the given data, ageing population in the UK in 1985 are extremely lower than the predicted year’s ageing people and the country that had a higher older population belongs to Wales for the given years.

According to the given information, Wales had more than 15% of aged people in 1985 and it was projected that in 2035 it will be exponentially higher to more than 25%, a number that surpassed all other countries in the given years. The second rank who had higher aged population was the country of England with 15% in 1985 and that will be approximately 23% in 2035, while Scotland had just beneath 15% in 1985 and expected to increase higher than England ageing population at 25% in 2035.

Finally, Northern Ireland and the UK had an ageing population of around 12.5% and 15.0% in 1985 which was thought to rise in 2035 at the same number of ageing population (slightly beyond 23%).
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+2 # Kavery 2016-03-19 20:04
The provided bar graph elucidates the comparison of old population in UK in 1985 with expectations in 2035. Overall, it is expected to be an increasing trend in population by the end of 2035.

As is observed, Wales had the highest percentages of elder population (people over 64 years old) in both of the years. Meanwhile, 15% of the England’s population was elderly. Old age population was comparatively low, about 12% in Ireland in the year 1985.

However, an upward growth in the number of aged generation is being expected in 2035. The UK will be populated nearly one forth with aged people in the foreseeable future. About 8-10% growth is the ratio of older population is expected. Wales and Scotland might be the highly populated British country with 26and 25 percentages of elderly people respectively.

To summarize, an upward trend is awaited in old aged population is expected in the upcoming year 2035.
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