Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 128 - Consumption of renewable energy in the USA

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The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008.

Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.

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Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 128

Sample Answer 1:
The given pie chart presents the consumption as well as sources of different forms of renewable energy in USA from 1949 to 2008. In overall the total energy consumed in different forms show rose with many fluctuations during this period. If we see the graph in detail, we can categorize the data in two groups.

First group includes hydroelectric power and wood energy consumption. We can see that rate of energy consumed by hydroelectric power is higher as compare to wood energy. In 1949 both energy lines touch almost the same rate of consumption, which over years pass through many ups and downs and in 2008 again match the values with the difference of around point-one per cent.

Second group comprises bio-fuels and wind energy. Both lines show almost same trend of stability between 1949 and 1980 and then sharp rise afterwards. In 2008 grading, the consumption of bio fuels was little higher than the wind energy.

To summarize all above information, we can say that hydroelectric power was the most popular source of energy and wind power was the least. The trend of all energy forms is increased overall but in an irregular manner. Another interesting thing can be noticed that consumption of [W]wind and bio fuels remains at zero level between 1949 and 1980.

(Approximately 216 words | by Humairah Farooq) 

Sample Answer 2:
The given line graph shows the main sources through which renewable energy is produced in USA and also tells about its total consumption from 1949 to 2008.

Water and wood have been the main means of producing energy. Initially from 1950 to 1960 the energy provided by them has approximately been same being 2 Quadrillion BTU, but from 1960 to 1980, the production of hydroelectric power doubled than fuel provided by wood. This increased trend of making energy through water is consistent with the total energy usage. The generation of energy through biofuels and wind was introduced in 1980. Since then, they have made a contribution of less than 1 Quadrillion BTU in production of total energy. Yet this is a significant contribution as the overall consumption of energy increased in subsequent years reaching up to a maximum of 7 Quadrillion BTU by 2008. It just dipped in 2000 because hydroelectric power also decreased during this time, but then they both rose again.

The changing trends in gross energy consumption are consistent with the generation of hydroelectric power signifying it as the major source of energy production. Wood has been the second most important source, while biofuels and wind made little contributions.

(Approximately 215 words | Written by - Anum Faisal) 

Sample Answer 3:
The given line graph compares the consumption of main renewable energy sources in the United States of America from the year 1949 to 2008. As is observed from the graph, initially in 1950 about 3 quadrillion BTU of total renewable energy was used in USA and this amount reached to about 8 quadrillion BTU in 2008.

As is presented in the line graph, wood and hydroelectric power were the two sources for renewable energy in the USA in 1950 and total 3 quadrillion BTU energies were consumed in the USA in this year. The consumption of renewable energy in the USA kept increasing each year with some fluctuations. In the year 2008, the consumption reached to around 8 quadrillions BTU.

Until 1982, wood and hydroelectric powers were the two main sources for renewable energy and these 2 sources provided the renewable energy for the USA people. After 1982, Bio-fuels and wind power were introduced as renewable energy sources and after then the usages of these two sources keep increasing.

In conclusion, in earlier states the wood and hydroelectric power were the main sources of renewable energy in USA and after 2005, the usages of Bio-fuel and wind increased while the total consumption of renewable energy in the USA increased over time.  

(Approximately 215 words) 

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0 # Georfo 2016-01-28 01:49
For sample no. 1 there is no data provided from 1949-1980 about bio-fuel use.
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+1 # Ali 2015-11-19 11:22
The presented graph compares the total consumption of 4 different renewable energies namely wood, wind, biofuels and hydroelectric power and also their summation in more than half of a century in the USA in quadrillion units.

As is provided as a census of a perusal the usages trends of biofuels and wind were similar until 1980 and equaled to approximately zero. After that the biofuels consumption was increased monotonously until 2000 and after huge jump reached to 1.8 quadrillion in 2008. In similar scenario people didn’t use from wind power until 2000 and after that, this amount rose and met 0.7. The wood usage for energy remained constant between 1949 and1975 and fluctuated near 1.5 and after a big growth went up to 2.5 quadrillion in 1985. This proportion decreased steadily and achieved 1.7 units in 2008. The quantity of last resource was spouted remarkably until 1975 and after harsh oscillation obtained to 2 quadrillion in final year.

In summary the total amount of energy consumption and usage of various energy sources ascended over the period and after two falls in 1980 and 2000 it was mutated and gradually went up to more than 7 quadrillion as peak. Biofuels become one of the prominent energy sources in later years.
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+2 # worstmanz 2014-12-12 18:53
these sample answer should be checked. There are a lot of mistakes.
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