Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 19 - Amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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Academic writing task 1 sample 19

Sample Answer 1:
The given bar chart compares the money spent on different consumer goods by the people of four European countries namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany. As is observed from the illustration, British people spent more money on those consumer goods while Germans spent the least to buy them.

As is given in the bar graph, British people spent more than 170 thousand pound sterling for photographic films which is the highest amount spent on any consumer good by them as well as than other countries. British people also spent more than 160 thousand pound sterling for purchasing Toys and CDs, which is more than any other given nation. For perfumes, Tennis racquets and personal stereos they spent more than other nations as well. On the other hand, French people spent around 165 thousand pound sterling on purchasing photographic films which makes it the highest amount they spent on consumer goods.    

They spent about 158 thousand on Toys which is a tie with the Italian people. For photographic films, toys and CDs, their spending totalled second highest among the given four nations. Finally, they spent less than 150 thousand on remaining consumer goods. Italian citizens spent around 150 thousand on personal stereos, tennis racquets and CDs while they spent about 5 thousand more on photographic films and toys. Finally, German people spent less in all consumer good items than any other nation and their average spending was 145 thousand which is less than the other nations. 

( This model answer can be followed  as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)

Model Answer 2:
The chart gives information regarding the money spent on consumer goods namely photographic film, toys, CDs, perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos by 4 countries in Europe (Britain, France, Italy and Germany). The units are sold in pounds sterling.

Overall, Britain, among all the other countries, spent most of their money in all the 6 consumer goods in contrast with Germany spending the least amount of money in all the goods. British also spent the highest amount of money to photographic film while France spent the least amount of money to tennis racquets. In terms of photographic film, Britain spent well above 170 thousand pounds. This is the highest money spent on any other consumer goods. France came in second spending more or less 165 thousand pounds. Italy and Germany compared to the 2 latter countries; spent around 150,000 and 145,000 respectively. Toys and CDs are the second and third most purchased by the 4 countries.

Furthermore, Britain and France purchased tennis racquets the least with only around 155000 and 145000 respectively. Italy spent the least of their money in buying personal stereos with exactly 150000 same as well in Germany spending around 3000 pounds fewer than that of Italy.

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0 # Sayda 2017-02-26 04:43
Hi, why is it written in the past tense?
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0 # Nahid 2017-01-05 03:13
Dear Mentor, if I write the same as you did, can I get band 9 in writing task?
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-1 # Nazanin Al 2016-11-13 10:28
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0 # Sachin 2016-08-17 16:41
Dear IELTS mentor,
Kindly correct the France spelling in the given chart which is in the coloured form.
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0 # IELTS Mentor 2016-11-24 07:27
Dear Sachin,

Thanks a lot for pointing it out. We have corrected the spelling.
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0 # Dorji 2016-08-08 17:40
This chart shows how much money (in pound sterling) was spent on six consumer products in four European countries. It is very clear that Britain is the leading nation amongst other five European countries that spent the highest amount of money in these six consumer products, followed by France, Italy and Germany.

Interestingly, from these six countries, Germany is the only nation that spent nearly equal amount of money on these products, ranging from 145,000 to 150,000 sterling pounds. Regarding photographic film and CDs, Britain spent the highest amount of money followed by France, Italy and Germany in descending order. As for toys, France and Italy both spent 189,000 pounds. Regarding the money spent on photographic films, there has been a huge variation amongst these four countries; Britain spent 171,000 pounds, France 168,000 pounds, Italy 156,000 pounds and Germany 145,000 pounds. But there could be seen a slight variation in expenditure on stereo production by these countries.

Overall, according to this data source, British lavished in these products, while German were a bit more moderate consumers of these products.
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+1 # Marinda 2016-03-26 17:46
Dear mentor, thanks for your great effort, but excuse, both answers are not accurate, because Germany is not the least country in spending money. Germany is the least on only 3 categories photographic films, toys and CDs. On the other hand France is the least country in spending in perfumes and tennis rackets. While in terms of personal stereo Germany and France are equal.
best regards.
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+2 # Houda 2015-10-16 16:41
Thanks for this website.I learnt a lot from it. My question is why are you using the past tense while the date is not mentioned??
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+4 # IELTS Mentor 2015-10-17 18:05
Dear Houda,
If you look at the question you will notice that it says 'the amount spent on six consumer goods'. The word 'Spent' indicates that the expenses listed here are from past and that's why we used past tense. Hope that clarifies your doubt.
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+2 # Talvinder 2015-01-12 10:58
You add British end of one para but it is Britain.
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+1 # Javad 2015-04-19 14:02
Actually, it is a good Idea for paraphrasing.
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