Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 22 - Transport used to travel to and from work in one European city

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

    » You should write at least 150 words.
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 Academic writing task 1 sample 22

Sample Answer 1:
The given bar graph shows data on the type of transportation used to go to work and to return from the work in three different years. As is noticed from the given data, private car has become the most popular mode of transportation for the office goers and over time the popularity of bus has decreased.

Initially, in 1960, around 20% people used trains, 7% people used cars, 28% people used tubes and around 40% people used buses to go to work or to return from work. After 20 years, the popularity of train and car increased while the popularity of tube and bus decreased. In this year, more people used train than any other transportation as their mode of office transportation. The least used type of transportation was the tube and personal car in 1980. Finally, in 2000, the scenario changed and the car became the most popular mode of transportation which was used by more than 37% people. The second most popular transportation was tube while train and bus became the least preferred mode of transportation.

As is observed, people started preferring private cars over the public bus and train over the time.      

(Approximately 195 words) 

Model Answer 2:
The provided bar graph compares the types of transportation used by commuters in one European city in three different years commencing from 1960. Four transportation types- train, car, tube and bus are compared in the graph and it is evident that in this European city people used buses in early years but started preferring cars and tubes in later years to reach and return from their workplaces.

As is observed in the given diagram, the majority of the commuters (about 38%) in this city used buses in 1960. The use of tube comprised over 25% while approximately 19% passengers used trains. Only 6% passengers used cars in this year which was quite fewer than the percentage of other transportation users. After 20 years, the percentages of the train and the car users increased significantly while tube and bus users decreased. In this year (1980), more than 22% users used cars and the percentages of train users exceeded the passengers of bus users. Finally, in the year 2000, the percentages of car users rocketed and reached to bout 37%. The percentages of other transportation users decreased except for the tube that was used by 1 out of four passengers in this year. Interestingly the use of bus decreased to only 15% and that was lower than the commuters of any other transportation type to commute to and from their offices.

Sample Answer 3:
The provided bar graph gives information on the four types of transports used in one European city during 1960, 1980 and 2000. As evident from the chart, major changes were observed in the usage of cars and buses and cars become the most preferred transportation type in the later year.

In 1960, the maximum proportion of people travelled by bus (about 38%) compared to the 6% car owners. On the contrary, in 2000 around 37% population preferred travelling by cars, whereas only 15% bus passengers were there. The proportion of people who used tubes for transportation remained on an average between 20% to 30% during the 3 years period. It shows that tubes were popular even in later years. On the other hand, commuters who travelled by train increased from 19% in 1960 to 28% in 1980. However, the figures reduced to 22% by 2000. Cars and buses as transportations showed an opposite trend in their popularity.

To summarise, there was a tremendous rise in the usage of cars for travelling to and from the office from 1960 to 2000.

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+2 # Muhammad 2016-07-16 16:04
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of different modes of commuting for forty years from 1960 to 2000 in a European city. At a first glance, buses and tubes were the most popular modes of transports in 1960 to reach work and home, whereas over time cars have become the most common transportation system.

In 1960, the buses were the major way of travelling to office as compared to the cars, which had five times less passengers than the travellers of buses. There were more tube users than the travelled by train in this year. However, during 1980, all four types of transport systems were used by the commuters but car was the biggest commuting vehicle in 2000, which were transporting around 38% of the workforce to their jobs and back home. The passengers who had used their cars increased more than five times in 2000 than that of 1960. The travelling by the buses had greatly reduced, whereas the tubes and the trains were the common transport to work during 2000.
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+3 # Nima 2015-07-27 10:08
The provided bar chart shows the different modes of public transport to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000 namely train, car, tube and bus.

As is presented as a census of perusal the illustrated graph depicts car usage was only 6% in 1960 but it rocketed more than triple and reached to 23% and peak amount 37% in 2000. In different scenario bus had 38% usages in 1960 and remarkably dropped to 27% and met 15% in 1980 and 2000 respectively. So people preferred bus in 1960 and selected car as first choice in 2000. Tube got the lowest fluctuation among other vehicles; in1930 its usage percentage was 27%, after 5% diminution in 1980 and 3% growth in 2000 met 22 and 25 percent respectively. Also train had 19% usages in1930 and swelled up until 28%, same as bus popularity in 1980 then decreased and reached to 22% in 2000

In summary, car usages had the most growth and bus had the greatest fall among other vehicles in 40 years.
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-3 # Susanna 2014-06-29 06:54
What are the differences between the Writing task 1 questions :

a) Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

b) Summarise the main points and changes of the given data.
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