Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 28

The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time / year for people in Someland.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.

     » You should write at least 150 words.
     » Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.

Academic IELTS writing task 1 sample 28

Sample Answer 1:
The table shows how people in different age groups spend their leisure time in Someland over the course of a year. It can be clearly seen that the amount of leisure time available varies considerably across the age groups and that people of different age levels have very different ways of spending their leisure time.

According to the figures, as people age in Someland their social lives reduce. Teenagers and people in their twenties spend on average 500 hours per year on socialising and 350 hours of that time is with a group of more than 4 people. Although the total hours of socialising in their 30s, 40s, 50s and 60s is fairly constant (between 300-350), socialising with more than 4 people drops dramatically to 50 hours in the 30s and 40s age groups and only 25 from 50 years old. Group and individual exercise follow a similar pattern.

People of all ages spend a good part of their leisure time on entertainment such as TV/ video viewing and cinema. In both cases, teenagers and retired people spend around twice as much time as those who are at working age. Home entertainment ranges from just over a thousand hours for teenagers and retired people and an average of 600 hours for everyone else. Cinema accounts for 100 hours of the teenagers and retired people’s leisure time and 25-50 hours for the rest.

In conclusion, we can see there is a significant trend towards solitary and smaller group activities as people grow older and then teenagers and retired people spend a lot more time on entertainment than those of working age do.

(Approximately 270 words)  

( This model answer can be followed  as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)

Model Answer 2:
The given table presents data on the leisure time activities of people from different age groups in a year in Someland. As is seen from the given illustration, watching TV and videos is the most preferred free time activity for people of all age groups while time spent yearly on other leisure activities vary based on people’s age.

According to the given table data, young and older people spend more of their leisure time watching TV programmes and other videos than the people from other age groups. TV watching consumes 1200 hours of leisure hours for teenagers and 1100 hours for 70 plus population. This is the most popular leisure time activity of people as they spend more time on this activity than others. Socialising with more people is popular among teenagers while with the increasing age, people prefer to socialise with fewer people. Teenagers and young adults like group exercise while it is avoided by people who are above 60 years old. People from 30 to 40 seems like spend around 200 hours per years on  individual exercises. Finally, watching movies in a cinema hall comprises 100 leisure hours for teenagers while it kept on decreasing with the increase of their age except for the 70 plus population who spend more time on this activity than 20 to 70 years old people.  

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+2 # Nima 2015-07-16 11:17
The presented table provides information about amount of rest time of people by hours in each year for 6 different hobbies: namely watching TV or video, socializing with 4 or less people and with 4 or more people, individual exercise, group exercise or sport and cinema in somewhere.

As is given as a census of perusal in the table for Someland, socializing with 4 or less people and with 4 or more people have different behavior than each other, for example in teenager and 20s groups, proportion of leisure time are equal, 150 and 350 respectively. In other classifications, first section increases to 300, 250 and 200 but second section fall down harshly to 50 and 25. Group exercise starts with 450 hours for teenager but drops monotonously until 40s reaches to 150 hours and slumps to 50 and then 0 hours in 50s and 60s respectively. This scenario is different for individual exercise, 30s and 40s have the most time for this stir. People who go to cinema follow the same pattern approximately first 100 hours for teen then this value declines to25 for 40s and 50s and rise up to 75 for 70s.

In summary, watching TV is dominant activities between other as time consumption especially in teens and more than 70s but group exercise is 0 hours for 60s and 70s.
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0 # jamuna 2014-12-07 02:24
i think this description is wrong in time duration.
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