Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 32 - Higher Colleges of Technology graduates in the UAE

The chart below shows the Higher Colleges of Technology graduates in the UAE.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

    » You should write at least 150 words.
    » You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Academic IELTS writing task 1 sample 32

Sample Answer 1:  
The provided bar chart compares the number of male and female graduates from the Higher Colleges of Technology colleges in the UAE. As is seen in the given diagram, there are more female graduated in these colleges than the number of male graduates.

The most outstanding feature of the graph is female graduates outnumber males in all the colleges. For example, in Dubai, there are 30% more women graduates than men. There are also large differences in Al Ain and in Ras Al Khaimah. However, the number of men and women is almost equal in the colleges in Abu Dhabi. There are also big differences in the sizes of the colleges. Ras Al Khaimah has less than 300 students altogether, while Abu Dhabi has about 600 and Dubai has almost 1000

In summary, women outnumber men in all the colleges, and there are significant differences in the sizes of the colleges.

(Approximately 151 words) 

( This model answer can be followed  as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)

Model Answer 2:
The provided bar graph compares the male and female graduates in different colleges under the Higher Colleges of Technology in the UAE. As is observed from the graph, the number of female  graduates are more than that of male graduates in the USA.

According to the given bar chart, the number of female graduates from Al Ain college was 218 which was higher than that of male graduates from the same college. Second, the number of female graduates from the Abu Dhabi college was 293 while it was 273 for the male. The highest number of graduates could be observed in the Dubai college and among those graduates, there are 547 women and 426 men. A similar trend is also noticeable in the cases of Ras Al Khaimah and Sharjah colleges. These two colleges produced comparatively fewer graduates but women's ration was higher than the male graduates' ratio. The overall data shows that the female graduates outnumbered the male graduates in the given colleges in the USA.

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