Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 40 - An experimental flu vaccine was trialled in a large country town on females only

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Line Graph + Column Graph + Pie Chart:

In June 1996, an experimental flu vaccine was trialled in a large country town on females only. The result of this survey is presented in the following illustration.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

»You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
»You should write at least 150 words.

Line graph - flue rates for males and females
Death from Flue
Risk level among females who were vaccinated

Sample Answer
The given illustration presents data on the result of a survey made in a large town on the flu vaccine. As is presented in the graphs, more females were affected by the flu than men did and death rate among women from this flu was more than their male counterparts.

As is presented in the first line graph, from February to September the number of people who were attacked by the flu increased and after that the rate became stable. More female got attached by the flue than men and in the middle of the year, this infection spread among more than 3500 female and more than 2500 men. The bar graph shows the death rate from the flu and it can be observed that female death case was much more than the male death case. From June to August, 2 men died from the flu infection where 4 women died from the same flu.

Finally, the pie chart presents data on the aftermath of the vaccination. It can be observed that older women and children were at more risk than other age groups of females.  

(Approximately 184 words) 

( This model answer can be followed as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)

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