Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 59 - Number of travellers using three major German airports

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.


Airport visitors, 2007-2012 (millions of travellers per year)

 

2007

2008

2009

2010

2011

2012

Dusseldorf

27.2

36.4

48.2

37.1

33.2

45.6

Frankfurt

36.5

41.9

44.4

47.3

51.1

69.3

Berlin Tegel

17.3

26.6

39.9

43.3

43.3

43.3

Model Answer 1:
The given table data compares the visitors of three main airports of Germany from 2007 to 2012. As is presented in the data, the highest number of  travellers used Frankfurt airport and the total number of air travellers used these airports increased in numbers over time with some minor fluctuation.

According to  the given data, in 2007 thirty-six and a half  million travellers used the Frankfurt airport while this number was about 27 million for Dusseldorf and 17 million for Berlin Tegel. Almost 10 millions more passengers used those airports next years and this number increased for 2009 as well. In 2010 and 2011, some fluctuation could be observed. Finally, in 2012 the highest number of air travellers used the Frankfurt airports (69.3 million) while around 43-46 million travellers used the other two airports.

In summary, more people used the airports in Germany in 2012 than they did in previous years and the Frankfurt airport had the highest number of passengers compared to the other two airports.

(Approximately 167 words) 

 

Sample Answer 2:
The presented table compares the number of passengers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. It is obviously Frankfurt airport that transcended more passengers than other airports and the most of the travellers privileged this airport.

As is provided as a census of a perusal the given illustration gives some information about Dusseldorf, Berlin Tegel and Frankfurt airports. Initially, in 2007, more than 36 million people used Frankfurt, 17.3 million preferred Berlin Tegel airport and Dusseldorf receipted 27.2 million travellers. The number of Dusseldorf passengers swelled up until 2009 and reached to 48.2 million as peak and then declined its proportion till 2011 and met 33.2 million and then this ratio plunged to 45.6 million in 2012.

In the similar scenario Berlin Tegel passenger increased with mild tilt until 2008 and spouted with a steep slope and received 39.9 in million in 2009. After that, its amount reached to 43.3 million in 2010 and stabled with no fluctuation until  2012. The quota Frankfurt travellers rose monotonously from 2007 until 2012 with a gentle slope and achieved 69.3 million at last.

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