IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 226 - Visitors should follow local customs and behaviours

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Visitors should follow local customs and behaviours or the host country should welcome cultural differences?

Which one do your support and why?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Sample Answer:
There is a much debating issue talking about whether visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviours or the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Visitors should respect the local customs, demeanours and cultures of the host country. If the guests behave abusively to the emcee, it is not the polite way in our society. Before going somewhere, it is better to know the local traditions of a definite country. Every country does have the same customs, cultures, behaviours and origins. If individual follows the local customs of others in its respective places, it means mutual understanding to each other. If so, people on the earth will raise the esteem on one another and every country will reach a compromise, then the world will become the improving, beautiful and peaceful place ever to live in without wars.

As an example, many leaders from the world visit Myanmar and they recognise mutual respects and show affection to others such as saying ‘mingalarpar’, making a gesture of respect by putting the palms together and raising them to the forehead. They also value the religious customs by taking off their shoes and wearing the appropriate dresses on the flat ground around the stupa and pagodas. Too many local residents warmly welcome them gladly and heartily. The ignorance of local language and custom may lead to a big problem since it is disrespectful to another culture.

For another example, when I was travelling to Saudi Arabia as a visitor, I wore ‘abaya’ and covered my long hairs for going outside. This meant just paying respect for other culture and I did not lose my original identity. I even got some help and assistance from local people for my respect towards their traditions.

Therefore, to sum up, I strongly agree for the visitors to comply local customs and cultures of the host country.

(by Marlar Tinaye)

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