IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 444 - The only way to improve the safety on our own road is to have stricter punishment

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The only way to improve the safety on our own road is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1:
In my opinion one of the major causes of road accidents is the violation of traffic rules. The best way to keep the drivers law obedient is to give them punishment for offensive driving and for breaking the traffic rules. According to me the punishment must be very proportional to the mistake made.

Life is very precious and many people die annually in traffic accidents and many more get severely injured. To avoid traffic accidents, law must be very strict and vibrant. There are many scenarios of unlawfully driving. Young drivers seek pleasure with very high speed driving. Some bike riders get enjoyment while driving on one wheel. Some drivers think that wearing seat belt is putting a burden on their body. Few people even drive while they are drunk and they lose the good control on wheel and pedals. The only way to stop this lawlessness is to award the punishment. Punishment may be in the form of money, imprisonment, confiscation of licence, making the insurance high.

There are wide varieties of offenders; some do it for the sake of thrills and others due to human error and negligence. I believe that when there is element of human error, warning is enough. If we impose heavy fine for minor human errors then people will drive with anxiety and ultimately will lose confidence on wheels. My personal opinion is to educate the people before issuance of licence. In temporary licensure period drivers will learn about rules and regulation of roads, negative effect of alcohol in driving, maintenance of vehicle, own health, road safety etc. When someone will know about every bit of law and keeping in mind the consequences of violation then there will be least chances of offending the law and jeopardizing of life.

Life is very precious and state should frame every rule possible for provision of ultimate security to road users. Firstly drivers should be educated then given warning for minor human errors and lastly strict punishment for violation of rules.

[ Written by - Rizwan Chattha ]

Sample Answer 2:
Many people think that the best way to improve road safety is by giving stricter punishment to careless drivers. To a certain point, I would agree with the statement, but there are other methods that could also be used to improve it as imposing stricter penalty in my opinion is not the only way to ensure safety on roads.

On the one hand, it is true that having a stricter punishment and increasing the penalties for irresponsible drivers would reduce traffic accidents and improve road safety. For example, it is a fact that using a mobile phone while driving a car is a dangerous act. However, due to the light punishment, many people still use the phone while driving. Should the authority change the punishment into a heavier one, then people will consider twice before they use the phone while driving. Besides, violation of any traffic rule can lead to severe accident and if the punishment is made stern, people would likely obey them.

On the other hand, there is another method that the government could use in improving road safety besides having a stricter punishment. The government could make a campaign about safety driving through various media which would show the effect of careless driving. For instance, the government could make a safety video about road safety and upload it in social media since the message will be effectively spread in this kind of media. As more people are watching these videos, it is hoped that drivers will have a clearer view about safety driving.

In conclusion, to a certain extent, I agree that having a stricter punishment would improve road safety. But I also believe that it should also be supported with other ways, and one of them is by giving audio visual shows about safety driving.

[ Written by - Darwin Lesmana ]


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