IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 472 - Problems with environmental pollution have become serious

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Problems with environmental pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems.

Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1:
It is true that the issues  related to  environmental  pollution  have become one of  the  most  controversial  issues nowadays, and every nation  is wondering  about how to tackle the  problem. In my opinion, both government and people have to contribute to solve these problems or at least make it less dangerous.

On one hand, everyone bears great duty to protect our environment. To begin with, parents at home and teachers at school should teach the next generation about how to cause less harm to our environment and how to take care of our mother Earth. Through teaching the children about recycling and reducing waste, both parents and teachers can contribute a lot. Also, people can reduce the gas emissions by using public transports rather than personal cars and can choose to walk short distances or to their work-places. 

Moreover, by using fewer packages and less plastic and papers, they will reduce a massive threat to the environment. On the other hand, governments should take more efforts to reduce the pollution. Firstly, by making public transport more convenient to encourage more people to use them, this will save more money and energy. Secondly, through the media and campaign, many people can learn more about the importance of the environment. For example, in the UK there is a campaign called make Britain tidy and such campaign encourages people to contribute more to keep the environment clean. Finally, governments should introduce laws to limit the deforestation in many countries around the world, to ensure that there are enough green forests.

To conclude, there are many ways in which we can address the issue of environmental pollution, and both individual and government have their own responsibility for this.

[ by - Lubna Makawi]
 

Sample Answer 2:
In the last century, environmental pollution has become increasingly worse. One of the major causes of this phenomenon is human activity.  This topic is significantly important because there is only one Earth to live in. This essay will suggest some possible solutions to this issue.

First of all, one solution to resolve this dilemma could be to reduce the amount of cars on roads by encouraging the use of public transports. This could be managed through cooperation between governments and individuals. For illustrations, governments could ensure that public transport is more affordable and convenient for the general public; this might help to reduce car emissions to atmosphere.

Another solution to combat environmental pollution is via education. By this I mean that both parents and educators should raise awareness by teaching children from a young age how crucial it is to look after the environment. For instance, it has been proven that younger children pick-up information more quickly and follow the instruction given by teachers and parents. As this is the next generation who will inherit the Earth, their sense of responsibility is important to address this issue.  Also governments should introduce laws to limit the deforestation in many countries around the world to ensure that there are enough green forests, fortunately there are many nations who have already introduced this laws such as USA.

To conclude, this essay has discussed some of the possible solutions in order to help tackle the problem. In my opinion, reducing  the numbers  of cars and educating  the next generation  are key factors in helping  to save the planet, perhaps  in the future  if those  ideas are approved  the world will  be greener and safer.

[ by - Lubna Makawi]
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-3 # RAY 2015-02-19 19:36
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