IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 532 - Which types of workers benefit from early retirement

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.

Do you agree or disagree?

Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.


Sample Answer 1:
Retirement age is a controversial issue and having a single policy for all professionals is not practical according to many. While some people think that a pre-set retirement age would be helpful both for the government and the citizens, others, often disagree. This essay delves into this issue and gives a brief description what type of workers would be benefitted from the early retirement.

To start with, 65 years as the retirement age seems quite acceptable to many. This is the age when a person becomes physically weak and want to enjoy life without taking extra pressure of the occupation. Moreover, this ensures that the government can plan the retirement scheme for the retirees properly and does not face any problem to support those senior citizens who retired from their jobs.  

However, this is not the case in all professions and that is why many disagree with the set departure age. They also say that some professionals should have freedom to leave their jobs early and enjoy the benefits of early retirements. They express their view on the ground that 65 years is too late and some particular employees who want to enjoy their post-retirement years by travelling or doing something on their own. For instance, many employees dream to travel different parts of the world after their retirements and if they wait till 65, it becomes physically more challenging. Moreover, people who are in professions like teaching, politics and research have things to contribute even after they are 60. But this is not the case in many professions and they should be given the chance to take early retirements and create opportunities for the new. For instance, an IT professional might want to leave the full-time job when he is 45 and start his own company. If he is forced to work in a company till 65, he would never be able to fulfil his dream and a young graduate would not be able to find a job.

Getting back to the question, who would get advantages from early retirement, I think there are many professionals who can do so. First of all, any doctor can retire from his job and start a private clinic to serve more people at his convenient time. Similarly, the engineers and technicians can leave their job at around 40 and start their own business, travel the world and get involved in innovative works. I think anyone who has a better plan that continuing job after 45  should be able to do so.

To conclude, a set evacuation age is helpful for certain mediocre professions but not for the people who have their own dreams and plans. The government should consider to let employees take early retirement to give chances to the fresh graduates and to let the aged people achieve their aspirations.

[Written by Millan]

Sample Answer 2:
Retirement is a crucial period for everybody’s life. Some people believe that they have to leave the job at a certain age, while others believe that it should happen in advance to enjoy their rest of the life. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.

On one hand, people gain lots of exposure in their relevant field before they retire at the threshold age. Firstly, a person’s late retirement creates a lack of jobs opportunity for the younger generation. For instance, government employee retires at the age of 65, and for young, it is very difficult to find a job in that area. Secondly, creativity and innovative ideas are lacking in their jobs because of their long service. Finally, late retirement could introduce medical problems to the employees that should be taken care by the employer, which is an unnecessary expense for them.

On the other hand, people believe that early retirement has several merits than late retirement. It creates huge job opportunities for young people. After leaving the job, people could spend their time with their family. Moreover, they could utilise these time for doing any social services in their local area. In addition, early retirement gives pension and other benefits from the employer that could be helpful for rest of their life. Furthermore, government employees are more befitted if they retire at an early age because of pension and other benefits.

In conclusion, I believe that people should have the privilege to leave a job at any point of time in their career unless if they are working in government organisations which have a certain age limit.

( Written by - Manickam ) 

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+1 # Gaya 2017-02-10 09:13
The answer is not relevant to the question. The question is which type of workers should benefit from early retirement. It is not who will be benefited from early retirement of the workers.
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+2 # Sakshi 2016-06-25 16:09
It's confusing.
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0 # Niranjana 2016-05-24 10:19
Good essay. It's simple but contains required points.
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