IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 547 - The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1:
It is a fact that advertisements are now widespread on mass media. Some people believe that these do not serve any beneficial purposes and even spoil the society. There should be an advertising restriction to hinder their negative impacts on customers. So everything has its own pros and cons that’s why someone rightly said that all that glitters is not gold.

It is understandable that people want to remove advertisement from our lives because advertisements can be disturbing, therefore the pumping out of advertisement on the internet is distractive when doing research online and insertion of ads during TV dramas and movies is obnoxious. Moreover, advertisements are sometime misleading and cause impulsive purchase thus the exaggeration and eye-binding techniques employed in the advertisement overshadow the true function of product and the consumer, especially the young people, would fall victims to this intensive commercial completion.

On the other side, it is irrefutable that the proponents of advertisement argue that it is unfair to ban advertisement because it is the only efficient and viable way to shoe their products. If advertisement is eradicated then link between products and consumers would be cut off. Without advertisement, companies would find it hard to reach out to their customers. Consequently, the gaint companies would manipulate the market and small companies would never be known by the public. Furthermore, advertisement provides more options to consumers.

To put the sea into vessel, I pen down by stating that advertisement is disturbing now and then, there is realistic need of it. Government should make them more trustworthy. Nowadays, advertisement is an inescapable and necessary existence.

( Written by - Sukhdev Gautam

Sample Answer 2:
There is no denying the fact that advertisement plays a vital role in human life. Advertisement is the backbone of commerce and industry. It is a source of information as well as the source of entertainment. It is important for us. These days are the days of marketing. We cannot think of life without advertisement. Without advertisement life is like a fish without water. No businessman or industrialist can ever hope of tapping the market without proper advertisement. Advertisement is all around us on television, radio and newspaper.

Apropos to above parable about conversation, many people hold the opinion that advertisement is important part of our life because advertisement are the best way to educate the people. For instance, they inform the people about new products, their uses, merits and other similar products available in the market. Moreover, many advertisements are issued by the government agencies, NGOs, and social welfare organization which have great value in education the people. What is more, advertisements raise the standard of living of the people.

On the flip side, those who disagree to this point of view mention that those advertisements have their disadvantages because they distort and exaggerate reality. In addition to it, they aim at profits. Furthermore, another objection is that many advertisements are bad for that they provide the wrong information to the people. Besides this, the producers have become profit hungry. They throw the moral values to the winds.

To put the sea into vessel, I pen down by stating that advertisements put deep influence on the people’s mind. Some advertisements advise to the people to direction on the right path. Good advertisements help the people to choose right or wrong products.

( Written by - Sukhdev Gautam

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