IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 573 - The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.  

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Model Answer:
The environment is facing many hazards continuously. Interaction of the human being with the environment is the first and main reason for this. Humans are getting resources from the environment. But he never replaces or replaces only a few percentages out of what was taken. There is an imbalance for the future world.
As per the statement, fuel is a part of hazard making source to the environment. By increase price of the fuel will be a burden to the fuel users. But they will find alternative way to overcome from price increase in fuel. Example of; if individuals suffered by fuels’ price increase, they might attend to some part time jobs to cover this extra cost.  If it is an organization, replace by using required resources. Therefore, this method will not be a solution to stop continuously increasing environmental hazards.
Waste water, solid wastes are also hazardous to the environment. These harms will not stop by increasing fuel prices. Improper removal of electronic wastes is also a danger to environment. Usage of Chloro Floro Carbon (CFC) emitting electrical equipment such as refrigerator usage is increasing day to day. How this hazard will be controlled by increasing the price of fuel?
As mentioned in the statement, this system might be quite useful in developing country, since due to economic reasons. But this might not be useful for developed countries, since they could overcome from this situation easily. Also fuel available countries such as Middle East countries, this will be an advantage for them not to decrease usage of fuel, but to sell with a huge profit margin.
Therefore, increasing fuel price is one method of controlling hazards occur through fuel gasification. But, need to include many integrated systems to stop even increasing environmental harms, especially for the benefit of our future generations.
[ Written by - Niro Devi]
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