IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 686 - Children should be co-operative to learn more and to become better

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many people opine that a sense of competition in children helps them do better in life. Others refute this point of view and say that children should be co-operative to learn more and to become better persons in the future.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Some people view the world as a competitive place and push their children to win. Others, however, value cooperation and encourage their children to share, play and work together. In this essay, I will ask if winning always means that the others loose, and whether teaching our children to win is the best preparation for life.
 
Competition is undoubtedly good. First of all, it pushes us to do well, both as children and adults. Our physical limits are tested in competitive sports. Competition in business helps companies to produce new products and services, and competition in politics ensures that different opinions get heard and represented. For children, learning to compete is good preparation for the world. A second point is that competition does not just mean winning: children have to learn to lose well and to learn from their mistakes. In addition, competition does not just mean success for the individual. When competing as part of a team children learn the need to share and cooperate.
 
However, a focus on competitiveness is not always beneficial for children. To begin with, very young children are naturally egocentric. As a result, they have to learn that there are others around them. Children have to be taught the skills of cooperation and sharing. A further point is that by learning to cooperate and work in teams, children learn to share responsibility when things go badly as well as when they go well. Finally, in our highly interdependent knowledge society, very few breakthroughs happen as a result of one person's work or ideas. No matter how brilliant an individual is, his or her work is the result of working in a team or a community. In fact, many people now believe that all learning is social, rather than individual.
 
In conclusion, it is almost impossible to separate these two strands of our lives. We are individuals and we need to develop a "win-win" attitude. We need to be true to ourselves and what we need, but also to think about the other person's needs. If we can help our children to do this, we will be doing future generations a huge service.
 
[ Written by - Prabason Praba ]
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