IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 688 - Professionals of other important sectors are comparatively less paid

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Many people say that film stars, musicians and sports stars are highly paid whereas professionals of other important sectors are comparatively less paid.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In your opinion which types of job should be highly paid?  

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
There is a general believe that famous actors, singers or people who write famous songs and sports legends have a huge salary. However, I firmly believe that it is obvious and fair that the payment of famous people like movie stars, pop musicians or sports champions have is much higher than the salaries of different other professionals.

First of all, there is no doubt that the amount of payment of stars should be much higher than the amount of salaries of different kinds of work because people’s salary depends on the profit of the business and the expense. For example, in order to produce a movie or sing a song or do some sports activity, usually, people do not spend a lot of money. However, when their work becomes famous they have a huge amount of salary because their work is very popular and many people buy this movie or go to the theatre to watch the famous film.

The next point that needs to be taken into consideration is that famous artists have huge salaries because of their works are special and exceptional. For example, no one has the same voice as Madonna or Celine Dion. Another example is that no one can act in a  play as can Antonio Banderas. Whereas, a lot of people can be accountants, lawyers or doctors. Many people can learn, who to do these kinds of job and simply repeat the work according to written and already adopted rules. For these reasons, special professions such as movie stars, sports legends or pop musicians should have a bigger salary than people from different professions.

To sum up, it is evident that famous people should have bigger remuneration that people who have different professions because they produce special and extremely popular work that impossible to copy by anyone else. While accountant, lawyer or doctor position could be done by a lot of people.
[ Written by - Natalia Svetlova ]
Model Answer 2:
The entertainment industry has grown rapidly over the years. The artists are getting paid much more than anybody else. I strongly agree that they are getting higher wages in comparison to other sectors which deserves to be highly paid. This essay discusses the outrageous gap between performers and other professions and opinion about other jobs which should be well paid.

To begin with, entertainers’ income does not reflect in their work. For instance, sports stars such as cricketers are getting a vast amount of money for playing the game besides their performance. However, the people who are spending their money in cricket for business purpose obviously are not hand over very well. So it is clear that salaries of performers do not match the job they perform at all.

Secondly, artists' income can easily be distinguished from other professionals. Such as, the Hollywood superstar, Angelina Julie, can easily make one million dollars by participating in a single movie. In contrary, this number can never be achieved by workers of other industries. Apart from these entertainers, there are other sectors that deserve to be paid higher for their services. For example, teachers are in charge of education and moral character of next generation but considered underpaid. The other most important and foremost professional is a doctor who saves lives and gives hope to people by serving day and night should be paid off equal to the meaningful contributions they make.

In summary, entertainers do not offer anything greater than other workers. It is recommended that people who work hard should be rewarded appropriately so that the gap between stipends of different jobs should not be too significant.   
[ Written by - Samia Anam ]
Model Answer 3:
Many entertainers' and sportspersons' payment scales have become a matter of controversy in these days. Though some people justify high pay scale of them, I feel that this is kind of unfair.

One obvious reason to support my view is that the entertainers and sportspersons do not deserve a great deal of remuneration than many other important professions that contributing to national development.   To be more precise, entertainers and other popular artists may not be doing any extra valuable things to society and country in terms of developments. At this juncture, they deserve only a certain level of payment, which definitely less than other valuable professions. Moreover, these highly paid sportsmen and entertainers do not assure to perform well in further assignments. The professions which contribute to society and nation must be paid a handsome amount of salary and other perks than the entertainment professionals.

 There is an opinion that the employment such as medical professions and scientists are to be paid more than any other profession. In other words, the professional are really contributing to society as well as nations development, regardless of gender and social status. Doctors and Nurses look after the health services of the country, scientist work for new inventions and discoveries, which enhance the nation's developments at the same time.

However, an army of people argues that the entertainers and sportsmen are celebrities. So, they deserve good payment. Perhaps it may true, but we cannot deny that the valuable professions deserve more remuneration than entertainers.

Taking everything into consideration, I feel that the high payment scale category must be replaced as medical professional and scientists, who are the real heroes of the nation.
[ Written by - Basil Pallath ]
Model Answer 4:
Nowadays, the pace of changes in the world of technology is amazing. These speedy changes lead entertainment industry to become ahead of many sectors in our lives. A fastest growing popularity of stars in different fields is a controversial topic that is discussed almost everywhere in the world. To my way of thinking, people who are getting fame in the 21st century are highly-paid workers.

In one hand, I reckon that people are equal in every aspect so as our professions. Owing to the fact that we can divide employment world into two sectors we will understand that professions that serve mass entertainment requirements and whose working process can be seen on television are highly profitable, compared to those who are working in offices for long hours. Consequently, people show them less respect. In fact, these kinds of professionals can be more beneficial for society as well as for government than those who are famous from televisions. For instance, if we compare architects salary to famous musicians or pop stars income we can vividly see a sharp difference between them. If a senior architect's whole year's income makes up approximately $70,000, a famous pop star can earn two times more money by performing in a single concert.  

On another hand, a vast majority of TV stars such as movie stars or even sports icons have appropriate financial rewards that accurately suit its working standards as well as their high professionalism. For instance, Emma Watson who is a worldwide famous star should have a high income. We cannot deny the fact that high financial rewards can encourage people to improve themselves in terms of career. Some people believe that this kind of attitude will lead our entertainment industry to industrial prosperity.

In conclusion, I would like to say that after discussing both sides of argument my sentiments are on par with the idea that entertainers who are famous from the blue screen should have equal financial rewards as people working at other important sectors.
[ Written by - Ana Petriashvili ]
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