IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 881 - World is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication.

Do the benefits of globalisation outweigh the drawbacks?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Some people believe that boundaries between countries become less evident each year due to the rapid development of globalisation. Although this trend has some drawbacks, I would agree that the benefits of globalisation outweigh the drawbacks.

One the one hand, I believe that globalisation has many positive impacts on our life. Firstly, by globalisation business become increasingly international. Multinational companies tend to do more business across the world. So, they can produce products in some place and trade it in another. For example, McDonald's company opened many branches in every street across the world. Secondly, globalisation offer more job opportunities to people in developing countries and encourage investment in it. By this they fight poverty and low socioeconomic status. Finally, free trade between countries could strength the political relationships between countries and this may result in more peace and long friendship between them. Because of the free trade policy, many developing countries are now exporting goods to developed countries and that in terms of revenue generating is a huge sector. For instance, many Asian third world country are generating their lion share of foreign currency reservation by exporting readymade garments. This has been possible only because of the globalization.

On the other hand, globalisation is not beneficial to everyone. One problem is that globalisation could lead to increase redundancy and job loss in developed countries. Companies can move to developing countries where labour is cheap. Also, this associated with poor working and low salaries in developing countries. Another drawback is that globalisation can lead to increase waste production and pollution. This affect the human health negatively.

In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of globalisation outweigh the negative impact. Also, there should be globalisation regulation for the salaries and working environment and government should impose law to protect the environment from pollution.

[ Written by - Safa Ahmed ]

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0 # Shezy 2015-08-02 20:33
Is this essay checked by someone or not?

(ideas taken from simon-ielts e book )
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+1 # IELTS Mentor 2015-08-03 12:18
This answer was submitted by an IELTS candidate. We have it Copyscape checked. However, if we find that that was taken from any other source, we will remove it. Thanks for informing us.
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+1 # Shezy 2015-08-04 00:32
I was just wondering whether the essay was checked by some credible person or not. Its very well written and It would have been better if a band score was mentioned too. anyway ,thanks

p.s. ideas can be taken from anywhere. no copyright. so, no need to remove.
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