IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 915 - Governments should provide retirement homes

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People are now living longer than ever before and many old people are unable to look after themselves. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of families to look after the elderly, while others say governments should provide retirement homes for them where they can be looked after properly. Discuss.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Whether taking care of elder citizens is the sole responsibility of family members or that should be supported by the government is a very controversial issue. With the increasing life expectancy and modern healthcare system the number of senior citizens is increasing in most of the countries and how those old people should be supported is an issue that indeed requires a comprehensive discussion.

First of all, the people should themselves prepare for their old ages and save money so that they do not have to rely solely on others for their maintenance. It is quite a hard reality that if an old person has a good amount of money and properties the number of people to look after him would be plenty. The reverse is also true and that’s why the people should always have plans for savings for their rainy days.

However, old people not only needs medical support, a place to live and nurses to look after them, they also needs people to talk to them, care them and spend time with them which money cannot buy. The family members must take care of their elder parents or grandparents and spend time with them rather than sending them in a retirement home. It is quite inhuman to send an old family member to an old home while s/he has cared for the family members for the whole life. The debt we have to our grandparents and parents could never be repaid, however we should try to at least repay them some by caring them in a way they did when we were child.  

Finally not all old people will have close relatives and family members to look after them. The government would have to support those older generation who has served the country and society with their every effort. The old people have all paid tax when they were employed and thus the government has a natural obligation to support the old people by providing improved medical support, retirement homes with all necessary facilities. Government does not have control whether a family decides to take care of an old member or send them in a retirement home. But proper arrangement and facilities for those elderly should be supported by the government.

In conclusion, I believe that supporting older people is an issue that should be backed up in every way possible.  A young person should take preparation for his old age while the family members and governments should play their role so that those fragile and helpless old people do not suffer at all.

Sample Answer 2:
Nowadays people are living more than 80 or even 100 years and most of them are unable to look after themselves. The controversy over who is responsible to provide service for elderly people is hot debated. Some individuals suggest that families are required to care the old people, others argue that the government should organise retirement homes for aged group of people.

In many countries people firmly believe that families should take care about old ones who are unable to do it themselves. For example, in Russia, in China it is common believe that it is responsibility of families and if a family decide to send their parents to the retirement home it is considered disrespectful. Therefore, most of families do it themselves. There is a general believe that families can care better and provide reasonable services to their old generation rather than it could be done in the retirement homes where the service is poor and not sufficient enough. Not only this, it is considered that the most significant source of happiness can give grandchildren and children to the elderly whereas it cannot be provided by any of the retirement places.

On the other hand, the different opinion exists that the government should ensure a place in the retirement homes for elderly. For example, in Australia and Canada people argue that the government should give a place to the eldest when they are unable to provide care of themselves because the families should work, raise their children and live their lives most of all looking after themselves and the next generation. In those countries, the way of thinking and believes vary to Russia and China and people can rely on such institutions like retirement homes to look after their parents where the service is good and pleasant.

To sum up, there are two opinions about who should look after the old individuals and for different countries there is a different way to go. In my opinion, no matter who takes care about the old parents, it should be done properly and from the bottom of the hard. In the perfect situation, a balance is required between families and the retirement homes to look after the eldest.

[ Written by - Natalia Svetlova ]

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0 # Prashant 2015-06-13 17:39
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