IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 960 - Excess population increase is raising the pressure on earth

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Excess population increase is raising the pressure on earth. Therefore it is individual's responsibility to utilize earthly resources adequately.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Advancement in technology and social revolutions have opened various avenues for human. People are exploring each and every viable options produced by earth for their livelihood and luxury. Have it been utilization of excess utilization of electricity, water, fertile land for agriculture or natural gas resources; mother earth has been exploited till every extent. In apropos of the argument, though I agree that dwellers can spend natural resources with appropriate concoction, notwithstanding I am convinced that government must pass legislation to prevent overuse of natural resources.

To begin with, population has increased at multi fold rate in the past three decades, which has increased the usage of natural resources throughout the world. These are limited in quantity, so they should be used with adequate deliberation, else it is certain that human have to live without them in coming years or so. This can be confirmed by the report from environmental department of India that has warn human to use water and coal in limited amount to conserve them for future. Hence, human must act intelligently to prevent shortage of mandatory ingredients of life.

Nevertheless, onus is not only on citizens, but also its government's responsibility to pass obligations to use such resources sensibly. If the law makers will be able to pass the law then residents will certainly follow it; evidently it will help in optimizing the expenditure of natural constituents. For an instance, nobody would use personal vehicle to commute if government had the provision of fine on using them. Thus, cabinet must control the over exploitation using the law making ability.

To sum up, while deliberate usage of natural resources is liability of every responsible citizen, but it is government, which can derive it forcefully.

[ Written by - Anshuman Mishra ]

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