IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 1128 - How could computers be considered a hindrance?

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?

Use specific reason and example to explain to your answers. 

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1:
Computers are extensively used these days both in personal and corporate needs. This including banks, hospital, schools, research labs, retail shops, space stations, personal use and so on. People have different views about the benefits and drawbacks of computers. But I would like to examine how could computers be considered an impediment followed by a reasonable conclusion.

To initiate with, using computers all the time in childhood is counteractive because children can lose their creativity this way. Moreover, a child who is dependent on a computer, do not learn manual calculation and uses tools for spelling and grammatical error correction. Apart from that, the health hazards that overuse of computers causes cannot be overlooked. Next, hacking is very common these days and individual's bank account, email, and websites are compromised very often only to add more misery. Digitalisation and security holes are serious concerns about people’s privacy and safety. Furthermore, some people are addicted to computers and the Internet, and they are less interested in social and outdoor activities. That is why China often arrange boot camp training for computer and internet addicted persons. This is undeniable that computers can be a hindrance for many.

In addition to this, the national security of any country could be compromised due to the over-reliance on computers. For instance, “Garry McKinnon” who was accused in March 2002 perpetrating the biggest military computer hack of all time, hacked the server of “The Pentagon” and learned about the secret of defense department of the USA. Finally, with the use of computers and the Internet, interaction with family and friends has become less personal these days than it used to be.

To conclude, I would like to say that, every technology has both positive and negative sides. It depends on the individuals whether the use of computers would be positive or negative.

 

Sample Answer 2:
Many believe that computer technology has immensely helped the human race to progress, but others are convinced that it has more drawbacks than benefits. This essay examines how could computers be deemed an impediment.   

Many people are addicted to computers and the Internet and they have no social and personal life. Without a computer, many people believe that they cannot work or continue their study. For example, some people who work in the blue collar environment cannot work when the Intenet connection is interrupted. This over-reliance could bring catastrophic results, especially in sensitive sectors. A simple mistake in an atomic energy research centre can destroy million of lives.   

Moreover, it is undeniable that overuse of computers has health hazards. One of the examples is the solar radiation from the computer screen, which damages our eyesight. It has been reported that the number of people who wear glasses has increased significantly since the invention of computer technology. Computers have negative effects on the way people socialise and interact with each other. With the invention of portable computers, tablets and smartphones, people remain busy with their own devices. They use the Internet all day long in their room and scarcely take part in outdoor activities. Consequently, people's overall health condition is deteriorating and their social relationship is becoming fragile.  

In conclusion, although some people think that the computer technology has brought a lot of benefits for mankind, others think that it has more negative sides. Some of the reasons for this view are because of people's overreliance on the technology and negative effects on our health and social life as well.

[Written by - Darwin Lesmana]

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+1 # Nina 2016-07-08 06:08
IELTS Essay Topic: Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?

Use specific reason and example to explain your answers.

Essay Answer: Computers have greatly changed the world and even changing now. But as always, new technology brings new problems. In pre-computer ages, nothing like digital divides, cyber attacks and computer viruses was a concern. And the argument about privacy, freedom and copyrights are becoming serious due to the development of computers and the Internet.

Although powerful computers are available in the market, they are still very expensive for many people. In some places in the world, internet connection and electricity are yet to be available. The development of the Internet and computer is actually causing a huge gap between developed and underdeveloped nations. Companies want employees who have sound computer knowledge, and this makes it harder and almost impossible for people with no computer knowledge to get a job. Not only employees with computer skills are getting priority, in some jobs human are being replaced by computers. Computers in the medical sector, for example, can diagnosis the disease through values measured from a patient's body. However, not all the diseases will show abnormal readings. Traditional human methods of listening, observing and asking questions to patients still work, but more and more doctors nowadays rely on computers and do not use these old methods, and usually come out with a different treatment method.

Not only in the hospitals, in factories, the computer-controlled robots are wildly used for producing goods due to their efficiency, but these products usually have lower quality. Moreover, some traditional products have disappeared due to our over-reliance on computer technology. Finally, people are living sedentary lifestyle due to their dependency on computers and other electronic devices and the traditional way of life has become a thing of the past.

In conclusion, over-reliance on computers have many severe consequences and we should be wary of those negative aspects.
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