IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 1132 - Encourage the use of bicycles among wider population

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among wider population?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1:
It has been a while since the eco-friendly transportation bicycle was first introduced and the popularity of this  transportation seems like has decreased in many countries and this could have happened due to various reasons despite the benefits bicycles offer. However, there are several ways that could be helpful to encourage the society to use cycles for their day to day requirements.

Few decades ago bicycle was used as one of the main transportations and with the invention of motorised vehicles, the popularity of cycle has decreased. A cycle was an environment-friendly mode of transportation and was far useful and convenient than walking or using animal driven transports. People could move faster with the help of a cycle and that made this vehicle quite popular in many countries. Cycles do not use any fuel, do not omit any gas, using and parking this mode of transport is very easy and it is an environment-friendly vehicle. However, when the motorised vehicle was introduced, people switched to that as it is faster and can carry more weight at a time. The safe and green mode of transport- cycle, became less popular as people started using cars for commuting.

Among some minor reasons for the unpopularity of cycles, safety of the cyclist is a significant issue. Because nowadays roads are full of motor vehicles, safety of two wheelers cannot be ensured. In additions to that, slow speed discourages many people from the use of cycles. Finally, cycles are inefficient for long distance transportation.  

However, there are several key elements that should be implementing to gain back the cyclists to the road again. Firstly, governments should implement separate cycling path dedicated for the cyclist and that would ensure the safety of the cyclists. In addition to that, providing secure parking facilities will also encourage many to use cycles. Restriction on car ownership and increasing the price of fuel would encourage many to use cycle instead of driving cars. Registration process for owning a cycle should be very easy and people who use green mode of transportation should be awarded in different ways. Finally, awareness campaigns to educate people about the health and environment benefits of using bicycle could be a great step to motivate more people to use it daily. 
To conclude, a government has a great role to play to motivate its citizens to use bicycles and this would guarantee a green environment and healthier citizens to the country.

[Written by - Romesh Rodrigo]

Sample Answer 2:
It is a fact that riding a bicycle is good for our health and it is an environment-friendly mode of transportation. However, it is still not favourable in many countries. The following essay will discuss some of the reasons for this trend and several suggestions that could be implemented to encourage more people to ride bicycles.  

It is true that in several countries, the people do not like to use bicycles as their mode of transportation. Firstly, it is the view and the thinking of the people who still believe that bicycle is not a mode of transportation and it is only used for exercises. They think that riding a bicycle is only a sporting or recreational activity and for commuting they need to ride on busses, trains or drive their own cars. Secondly, since some governments do not provide any bicycle lane for the cyclists, people find it risky to ride bicycles in the main streets. Without the existence of the separate bicycle lane, some people think that riding a bike to work would be dangerous as they have to share the road with car commuters and motorcyclists.

There are several things that governments could do to persuade their people to ride bikes. One of the solutions is by providing separate cycling lane for public. By having a lot of bicycle lanes in the area, it is hoped that it will encourage the residents to ride bikes for their daily commuting. Another solution could be encouraging and informing people by making campaigns about the positive effects of bike riding to the societies. The promotion should be attractive and informative about the benefits of cycling to the people. Lastly, the government should also lead by examples about bike riding. One of the examples is that the government could persuade their employees to ride bicycles on a daily basis. By seeing that government authorities are riding their bike to work, it is hoped that the public will also follow the example.

In conclusion, although bike riding has become a popular mode of transportation in some countries,  but it is still not widely accepted in several other countries. It is because the mindset of the people which believe that cycling is a just a matter of sport and cycling lanes are not available in their country. The governments should make some action plans to persuade their people to ride bikes, as it is beneficial for the people and the government as well. 

[Written by - Darwin Sugiharto]


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+1 # Hasdi 2017-03-07 01:29
What band score do they get?
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