IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 1147 - Face to face communication will become a thing of the past

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.

To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.


Sample Answer: (Disagreement)
Use of the internet and smartphones has become a global phenomenon and each of us is dependent on these technological marvels in one or the other way. While there is a notion which asserts that widespread use of the internet, online communication and cellular messaging will replace the traditional form of face to face interaction, - I completely disagree with it.

to begin with, the use of the internet and other latest communication technologies drive us to meet new people and contact the dear ones who stay far away. This can especially be true when one gets a chance to express his feelings via a text or phone call. To quote an example, Skype and Facebook have enabled people living in far flung areas to communicate effectively through video chats, thereby enabling us to contact more frequently with people we care about. This has not replaced the way we care and meet others, rather it has made it more convenient and frequent.

While the advancement of technology might scale back in personal contact to some extent for a short term, the web can, in fact, enable the present and future generations to become more polarised towards seeing siblings, parents and mates in the long run. This can be easily visualised by taking into account that if we are to sustain the net as a tool to deliver our emotions and beliefs to the world,  we will need to picture proof gatherings, celebrations and events thereby obviating the need for face to face communication. Secondly, it is a well-acknowledged fact that 'the human is a social being' and it is to the credit of this physical presence that we as a species are able to harness long-term relationships, so its value cannot be undermined for times to come. Mere endorsing words of good character by texts cannot inculcate the right kind of virtue, thereby further laying emphasis on human presence for future is required.

To conclude, by seeing both sides of the spectrum, it is clearly evident that the internet and text messaging will not make the face to face communication a footnote of the past.

[Written by - Sadaf Malik]

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0 # Pooja Gupta 2017-06-29 01:29
Essay Topic: With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.

To what extent do you agree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Answer:
Technological progress has brought many changes in our lives and one such benefit of technology is the way we conversate and communicate with each other. Face to face conversation has been replaced by Skype and WhatsApp calls or messages, and the internet has become an inevitable tool for maintaining relations. I would like to contend by saying that one-to-one conversation will no longer exist. It's heading towards extinction and there are a plethora of reasons to support this.

Technology is advancing at a rapid speed with every single passing day. No one would have thought until a decade back, that interviews, appointments with doctors, counsellors or online coaching would all be possible without our physical presence. But the man kind's sheer hard work and dedication have made everything possible. Its's a boon for the people who are always busy in professional life to stay connected with their friend or families.

Recently there was a headline in news that a couple got married on the internet as they belonged to different parts of the world and making themselves available physically was quite difficult.

Communication via the internet is not only convenient but saves a colossal amount of time, energy and effort. Video calls are as good one-to-one interactions as one can see the other person's activities live. This technology has helped the families beyond boundaries These days there are many youngsters who look out for an opportunity in foreign countries and in this situation, video calls help the parents to stay connected and be in touch. All these trends indicate that conventional physical presence for communication would no longer be required as there would be a far better way of communicating in the future.

I would like to conclude by saying that this internet technology is a saviour for the people who are always busy with their work to communicate with their acquaintances and maintain the relationship with the help of this technological marvel.
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