IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 171 - Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. 

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers.

Do you agree or disagree?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer:
I think the idea about evaluation teachers by their students is very good. This kind of evaluation can bring many benefits to teachers, students as well as to school. In the following paragraphs, I will give my reasons to support my answer.

First of all, teachers have the opportunity to find out from this kind of test how good and clearly, their students understand the lectures. It will help them to improve and perfect their knowledge and experience. Also, teachers who get high grades must be rewarded financially or otherwise. On the other hand, the teachers who receive low grades must be sanctioned, for example by decreasing their salary. So, this can help to uplift the level of professionalism among the teachers.

Second of all, students will more often attend lectures because they will be asked to evaluate their teachers. Students will have the opportunity to choose the best teachers because if a teacher gets a low grade he or she may be fired and replaced with the better one.

Finally, the quality of education will increase dramatically. Students will be getting more interesting and professional lectures. Also, they will constantly attend classes in order to listen to an amazing lecture and make an evaluation of the current teacher. In addition to those practical benefits, a school will be better funded by it is sponsors and appreciated in the community. This, in its turn, will attract more students because it will be an honour to study in such a school.

To sum up, I think that evaluation of teachers by their students will bring many benefits and allow students as well as teachers to gain more knowledge and experience.

(Approximately 279 words)
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+2 # DucPham 2015-11-11 16:47
Hello,
I have written an essay about this topic. Is there any one can correct it, so I can enhance my writing? Here is mine:


There is a fact that education is one of the biggest issues in every country. Nowadays, lots of students can evaluate their teachers. It is because of the benefits for both teachers and students.
One of the benefits is that teachers can enhance their teaching skills. It is obvious that teachers know how to satisfy demands of teaching jobs through their students’ view. Students give objective comments for teachers. Therefore, teachers can gain recommendations. On one hand, they can realize their drawbacks in teaching strategy and change them. On the other hand, they may receive compliments for what they have done. That makes them feel positive and love their teaching job more to strengthen their upsides. In conclusion, teaching skills are improved by the evaluation of students.
Furthermore, students gain benefits by evaluating their teachers. To begin with, it is an open opportunity for them to express personal opinions. They can say what they like and do not like forwards their teachers’ lessons. Therefore, both students and teachers can know more each other. Additionally, giving comments on their teachers trains students to be critical in thinking. It is probably because they have to judge them for not only advantage side but also disadvantage one. In brief, students benefit with a good relationship with their teachers through practicing thinking critically about this teaching issue.
To summarize, there are numerous advantages for students to evaluate their teachers in schools. Therefore, teachers benefit themselves with judgments from their students. I suppose it is a conical relationship which stays positive. Thus, it should be promoted.

Thanks in advance.
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+2 # #0307 2015-05-05 12:39
Actually, I think that those three ideas could be put up in to one as they are all saying that it would increase the class's quality.
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+2 # angel 2015-01-19 12:15
its very clear language for weak students thanks....
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+1 # angel 2015-01-19 12:13
gorgeous....
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