IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 189 - Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
It is true that some secondary schools require their students to wear uniforms, while others allow their students to wear free clothing. Both policies have their own positive points, but I personally think that it is better for high school students to wear uniforms.

To begin with, it is common that some high schools do not require their students to wear uniforms. They believe that uniforms should not be the main concern of education, and schools should focus more on the curriculum quality and learning process than focusing on dresses. Besides that, they also believe that spending on school uniforms is also a waste of money, as the fund could be allocated for other important matters such as books or stationary.  

On the other hand, for a number of reasons many secondary education institutions necessitate their students to wear school uniforms. These institutions believe that by wearing school uniforms, students will learn about discipline; and how to wear proper and formal clothing. By allowing the students to wear free clothes, there might be a risk that students will wear inappropriate clothing during school hours. And then with the existence of school uniforms, it will not differentiate the economic class of students.  Although some students might come from a wealthy family, but they must wear the same quality clothing as the other students who come from various backgrounds.

In conclusion, it is a fact that wearing school uniforms has become mandatory for several secondary education institutions, but there are other institutions who allow their students to decide their own clothes. Both points of views have their own advantages, but I believe that wearing school uniforms for high school students is more favourable than wearing free clothes.

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Model Answer 2:
I think that the issue whether all students are required to wear school uniform is the one that is open for debate. Some people think that all students must wear the school uniform. However, others think that students should decide what to wear to school themselves or by their parents. Personally, I believe that students should wear what they like. For several reasons, which I will mention bellow, I think that school uniforms should not be required to wear at high school level.

First of all, if students do not have school uniforms they can wear what they like to wear. Personally, I like to wear clothes which are comfortable. Also, I am a female and I like to wear jeans and shorts, and as far as I know girls must wear skirts as part of their school uniform. I think many female students will agree with me that jeans are much more comfortable than skirts.

Second of all, I believe that school uniforms must not cause any discomfort. For example, some international students will find it unacceptable to wear some of the uniform's parts. I am from Russia and when I was a student of the elementary school I was required to wear the school uniform that included a dark blue skirt and a white or light blue shirt. I did not like it very much because I did not like the fact that all students were dressed in the same colour. We dressed the same way and we were permitted to wear any adornments. Personally, I did not like the fact that girls always had to wear skirts and it was not convenient, especially in cold weather.

In short, I think that students should wear to school what they want. Otherwise, if a high school requires students to wear school uniforms, I think that uniforms must be comfortable for all students.

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0 # Tintu 2016-10-17 09:22
Essay Topic: Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Answer:
It is observed that some of the secondary schools require their students to wear uniforms, while others allow their students to wear clothing on their wish. Both the policies have their own positive points, but I personally think that it is better to have uniforms for high school students.

On the one hand, the educational institutions which do not recommend uniforms for their students believe that a better curriculum and good teaching standards are essential for education rather than the dresses their students wear. Moreover, they prefer the money spent on uniforms to be used for buying books, guides and other stationaries.

On the other hand, asking students to wear uniforms strictly help to develop discipline among them. Furthermore, they learn how to wear proper and formal clothing. In addition to that, if students are free to wear any dress, there can be chances of pupils wearing inappropriate clothing to the school like mini skirts, sleeveless tops, tight jeans, short tops etc. which are not allowed in many countries. The use of school uniforms can also avoid the discrimination of the economic backgrounds of the children since everyone is wearing the same uniform. Also, students of a particular school can be easily identified by the uniforms they wear. So to summarise, I suggest that high school students should wear uniforms in the schools. However, provisions can be made to allow the students to wear clothes of their choice once in a week or so.
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-1 # CskaSofia 2016-06-14 17:39
The model answer 2 is great. I like your opinion. Nice one man!
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