GT Writing Task 1: Sample 117 - You borrowed a book from the library and it is now damaged

IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You borrowed a book from a public library and the book is now damaged.

Write a letter to the librarian to explain the situation. Your letter should include:

  • details about the book
  • how it was damaged
  • what you want to do about it

You should write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,


Sample Answer 1:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Two weeks ago I borrowed a book from your library. I was excited to have read the book but very disappointed to recently find that it was damaged. I am hoping you will allow me to purchase a new book of the same title as a compensation.

In relation to the specifics of the book, I borrowed 'Nineteen Eighty-Four' a novel by George Orwell, on 17th July from your library using my library card BM-450124. I have been thoroughly enjoying the book and almost finished it until it got damaged.

Unfortunately, On 25th July, three days before the due date to return the novel, I found that it was ruined due to the pouring rain that somehow reached my table placed near the window. I put the book on the table and had been outside the whole time it rained. All of the books on the table absorbed rainwater and the book I borrowed from the library is now unreadable due to the damage the water caused to it.

As a solution, and because I really want to express my apology for the incident, I seek your permission to purchase a new book with the same title for the library. I am also hoping that you would not impose any penalty for the incident.

Thank you in advance and I hope to hear your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,

Erica Jong


Model Answer 2:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a member of your library- The Graham Public Library and have been enjoying my membership for the past three years. I would like to explain why I have been unable to return a book I borrowed two weeks ago. I am hoping that you would allow me to purchase a new book of the same title and do not impose any fine on my membership.

I am Shirley Beth and my library membership number is CA-GP 125401. I borrowed the book 'The Watsons' - a novel by Jane Austen, on 24th July 2018 and the deadline to return the book was on 2nd August 2018. Unfortunately, on 1st August, I found that the cover page of the book was gone and pages 10 to 24 were missing! It's hard to read the rest of this book since there are tonnes of scratches on it. Off the top of my head, my dog damaged the book when I was out to attend a party with a few college friends.

I guess I forgot to feed my dog when I hurried out to attend a party. He was too hungry that thought the book was something he can eat. I must confess it was a mistake I should have been more careful about it.

I cannot deny that I should be responsible for the book of indemnity. However, as an old member and a regular visitors to your library,  I would request you to allow me to compensate for that by purchasing the same book within the next week. I would also request you not to impose any late fee or penalty for the incident.  

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Shirley Beth

[Written by - Shirley]

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