Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 112 - Number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013

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The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.

Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 112

Sample Answer:
The given line graph compares the London museum visitors from June 2013 to September 2013. As is presented in the given data, British museum was the most popular museum in terms of visits and there were some fluctuations on the number of visitors for the given 4 months.

As is observed from the line graph, British museum was the most visited museum in London in 2013 and in June 2013, around 600 thousand people visited this museum. In the same period, there were around 550 thousand visitors in the Natural History Museum whereas 400 thousand visitors visited the Science Museum at that time. In the next month, the visitors of British museum increased to 750 thousand, reaching at the highest point, while the visitors of other two museums decreased. With some fluctuations in the next two months visitors the visitor numbers of British museum reached to over 650 thousand in September 2013 where as the number of other two museums also started increasing than the previous month and was around 450 thousands.  

In conclusion, the British museum had the highest visitors for the given period and the visitors’ number for all the three museums fluctuated throughout the given four months of the year 2013.

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+2 # Nima 2015-11-03 08:50
The given illustration compares the numbers of visitors to three different London museums in 4 consecutive months in 2013. It is clearly seen that the British museum got the highest visitors in the given period.

As is presented in the line graph, in June 2013, six hundred thousand visitors visited the British museum which was higher than the number of visitors in two other museums. In this month, the Science museum got about 550 thousand visitors and finally the Natural History museum got 400 thousand visitors. Looking at the details it is obvious that the numbers of observers in the Science museum plunged in July and August but reached to 470 thousand in September. Similarly, the visitors to the Natural History museum declined monotonously until August and reached to 300 thousand as nadir and spouted till 450 thousand at last in September. The trend of the British museum was different in July as it received more than 750 thousand people in this month. Its spectators lunged rapidly and reached to 750 thousand as summit and slumped dramatically to 500 in August. In is noteworthy that the number of spectators to the museums in September showed an upward trend.
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