Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 11 - The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
 

» You should write at least 150 words.
 

                                             Sales: week of October 7-13

 

Mon.

Tues.

Wed

Thus.

Fri.

Sat.

Sun.

Lunch

$2,400

$2,450

$2,595

$2,375

$2,500

$1,950

$1,550

Dinner

$3,623

$3,850

$3,445

$3,800

$4,350

$2,900

$2,450

Sample Answer 1:
The provided table represents information on sales of a downtown small restaurant of a typical October week starting from the 7th October till 13th October. As is presented, the restaurant's earning from dinner is much more than the earning from lunch except for the weekend, Sunday.

In Monday, the beginning of the week, the restaurant sells lunch of 24 hundred dollars compared to the sales of dinner of 3623 dollars. The sales of dinner compared to lunch is significantly higher than the sell of lunch for the six days of the mentioned week except for the Sunday. The sale of lunch in Tuesday remains almost same as it was in Monday but the dinner sell increased by almost 200 dollars. The earning from the dinner is lowest on Saturday and it is less than 3000 dollar. In the weekend the lunches bring an amount of 1550 dollar compared to 2450 dollar dinner.

The restaurant earns about 15 thousand dollars a week by selling the lunch and on the contrary earns about 22 thousand dollars by selling dinner.

(Approximately 178 words) 
( This model answer can be followed  as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)

Model Answer 2:
The provided table gives data on the sales of a small restaurant for the second week of October month. As is observed from the given presentation, the sales volume of dinner is higher than the lunch sales volume throughout the whole week except Sunday and people spend more money for lunch and dinner to the restaurant on Friday.

As is presented in the comparison table, the sale amount of the restaurant in lunch time is around $ 2300 to $ 2600 from Monday to Friday. Their sales volume of dinner for the same days of the week is between $3400 and $4400. But on Saturday and Sunday, a different trend is observed when the sales volume drops compared to other days of the week and this is possibly because of the days off. On Sunday the sales volume of lunch decreases to $ 1,550 and dinner to $ 2,450 which are the least amounts they sale in the week. Interestingly the dinner sales volume on Sunday night drops to only $ 2045 which is almost 2 times less than the amount they sell on Friday night.

In summary, the restaurant sales more for dinner than the lunch and people tend to eat less in restaurants on Saturday and Sunday.

Model Answer 3:
The given table represents daily sales value at a restaurant in the downtown business district during an October week. The data is split into two parts first being sale generated for lunch and second being for dinner.

First look at the data depicts that the sale revenue generated during dinner is more than that for lunch and revenue generated during weekends is lower when compared to average revenue earned during a typical weekday.

The week starts on Monday with revenue of 2400 bucks for the lunch and 3623 for dinner which is more than 50% of revenue realised during the lunch time. During lunch hours the revenue seems to be showing an increasing trend and reached its peak on Wednesday with $2595. It crashed from there to $2375 on Thursday but regain momentum on Friday with closing figure of $2500.

On the other hand revenue during lunch hours seems to be dwindling throughout the week. Showing a rise on Tuesday then a fall on Wednesday but it closed its week with the highest revenue of $4350 on Friday. Weekends tells a different story altogether, revenue which was hovering around $2400 for lunch and around $3600 for dinner, crashed to its lowest point on Sunday with disappointing figures of $1550 & $2450 for lunch and dinner respectively.

To conclude, it is evident that dinner seems to be more cash generating avenue than lunch with a maximum revenue gap of $1850 on Friday and weekends tends to be low in terms of revenue when compared to weekdays.

[ Written by - Bhupender Bhakuni ]

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0 # thanhhuong 2016-01-03 20:35
Thank for your sharing. It's very useful.
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0 # #Rahi 2015-02-09 13:18
Hi, could u tell me what does the sentence mean "the sales volume?
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0 # xtz 2016-11-29 06:45
Yea, it notifies the volume of sales.
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0 # IELTS Mentor 2015-02-10 00:29
'Sales Volume' means The quantity/ number of goods/ services sold in the normal operations of a company in a specified period.
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0 # jyothis jose 2015-02-09 00:37
Hi everyone I like both the answers and both give us an idea on how to use comparisons as well as the exact usage of linking words in each and every paragraph.
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-3 # Bonny 2014-06-29 22:19
Both are nice answers for the IELTS writing task 1
"The sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district."

Looking forward for the recent IELTS writing task one questions with answers.
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