IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 373 - The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat.

What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

Give reasons and relevant examples for your answer.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer:
Today, number of species under extinction threat is increasing and that is showing us the importance of biodiversity.  Fortunately it is not too late to maintain biodiversity. With small but effective changes we can save many species.

First of all, reducing the water pollution can create a great relieve on water species. According to the biologist the 80 % of all existing creatures are living in the water. Water Pollution is reducing the kinds and population of that creature day by day.

Chemical and biological wastes are keep polluting fresh water reserves and seas. For example every year million gallons of polluted water was discharging to the rivers and sea in Istanbul. Because, there was no sewer treatment facilities in Istanbul, sea became too polluted and there was nearly no underwater life. After government decided and build sewer treatment facilities,

Water reserves and sea have become clearer and it has a great impact on biodiversity. Today curious eyes can even see the dolphins in there. Another caution for maintain biodiversity is forestation. Today most of the land creatures are need forests for living and forestation can create new living areas for many kinds of creatures, especially for mammals. The best example of it is city of Abu Dhabi. İn the seventies, Emirate of Abu Dhabi decided to create a forest in the desert. After a well organised forestation plan, they managed to create a forest and today it is a great attraction point to people who want to see the forest habitat. There are many kinds of creatures from mammals to endemic insects.

As a result, today extinction is great threat for many species. The pollution caused by people and deforestation causes great risks for many kinds of species. On the other hand it is not too late for many of them. With small action we can prevent the extinction of al lot of species and we can maintain the biodiversity.

[by Sinan]

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