IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 448 - It is not necessary for adults to receive education in class

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer:
Education is a continuous process and thrust for knowledge is everlasting. Adult education is a controversial issue and some groups of thoughts argue that adults can learn things by themselves and the common mentoring technique in the school is unnecessary for them. Even though classroom learning has its own advantages, I believe self study is more beneficial for adults.

Obviously, ‘internal motivation and hard working’ is the core in all success stories. Therefore a highly motivated person can learn alone by utilizing the advanced technologies. For illustration, online education is a newer trend and even someone working can attend certification course through Internet. In addition, most of the companies are offering continuing education as part of their working schedules. So workers can improve their knowledge by this without attending regular classroom courses. Furthermore, for an adult it is cumbersome to get back to a student life in most of the cases. The advancement in technology has made it possible to learn from home and adults do not need teachers to look after their behevious or discipline them to study. It is a well known fact that self-learning is best learning and this is quite applicable for grown up people.  So supporters of this view believe that for grown up people class room learning is unnecessary and waste of time.

On the other hand, some people believe that education is meaningful only by regular classroom mentoring. Self motivation is sometimes ineffective and necessitates the teachers for evaluating and guiding them. Moreover they believe that adult life is different from children because of the internal as well as the external factors affecting their learning process. For instance, adult life is complicated with lot of responsibilities and tensions. Therefore continuous motivation by an external mentor is inevitable. Online education programs and other continuing career development programs often lack this opportunity and hence this group of people believes that classroom education is the best option for adults.

Put everything into consideration both these methods have their own advantages. However I think that a highly motivated individual can gain knowledge by self learning and for such adults self-learning is a far better choice than attending formal educational institutes.

[Written by - Haisuhu]

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