IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 452 - People give more emphasize on outlook and spend more time on

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people say that People give more emphasize on outlook and spend more time on that than the past. What is your opinion on that? How this trend has changed over the decade?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer:
At the present time people concern about their appearance more than in the past. Throughout history, beauty valued very high. It is believed that human beings nowadays spending more time on their outward than their ancestors did. This will be shown by taking into account comparing past and present usage of cosmetics and plastic operation in our daily life.

Firstly, usage of cosmetics was the popular since the dawn of time and today's life it isn't exception. For example, in the past people also applied a lot of cosmetics on their face to look more beautiful, despite that some of them were harmful or even dangerous for life. Nowadays we can see same situation, people using cosmetics in spite of that they don't really know what it contains. But in today's world we have surgery, which can help us to dispose of from our outward shortcomings. As my example shows, there weren't any specific changes in usage but currently we have more ways to make better our outward appearance.

In addition to this, medicine is also helps us to hide our shortcomings and one of them plastic surgery operation. Changing of God-given body can be really harmful for your health and even kill you, because it has some defects which cause incurable diseases like: cancer and papkalotimiya. Therefore, doctors don't recommend you change your body or face. It's obvious from my example that people ready to all kind of pain and harm only for looking good.

Following the analyzing at how people used cosmetics in the past and how they use it now, in my view, there was only little change. It has been proven that people ready to all risks just for beautiful face.

[ by - Akmal]

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