IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 490 - Some people help their community as an individually

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people help their community as an individually while others help through organisation. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.


Sample Answer:
Community is an incredible way to give aiding to poor, unhealthy or many other who face many fundamental problems on earth. There are two modes to give aid to community like some people donate money, food or many more individually while others as an organisation through. We will look at both sides before drawing a logical corollary.

Some people belief that if they aid to community by as an organisation then it is very beneficial for community donation because in organisation’s people do work or collect money as an unity so it is obvious that if they collect as an group from door to door then they collect positively correlated with individually. For instance, In India, the most famous organisation as in worldwide is 'Athithi Dev Bavo', which helps to many persons or communities. They provide foods, shelter or good education as well as they provide a job opportunity to poor person , who are not able to get this thing in their lives. Thus they believe that aiding to community as an organisation is better.

On the contrary side, some other people think that if they donate something to community as an individually then it is beneficial for community and donor. They think if they donate money in organisation then some time they do not utilise the money as an incredible way and sometime some group of people use the donation on other purpose. Moreover, it is also beneficial to earn a more popularity. For instance, the actors of any industry give huge money to community to earn a more popularity even some rich person also do this thing. However, some rich people make hospital or school for community where people can get many free facilities such as free treatment, free medicine as well as free operation facility. As an evidence, in Japan, there several individual people who made a contribution to build up numerous hospitals and schools for giving a higher education or cure to community and thus , they belief the giving a help by direct is creditable .

To sum up, although above look revels solid evidence for both sides argument, I strongly believe that if we pay as an independent then its positive correlated with organisation and the money utilities as in incredible mode unlike organisation.

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