IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 499 - Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:

Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1:
It is believed that international events such as the Olympic Games play a vital role in maintaining the world peace, and to show nationalism in a proper way. To a certain point, I would agree with the statement but some fights among the supporters have been reported in past venues.

On the one hand, it is true that events such as the World Football Cup or the Commonwealth Games can be used as a tool to maintain the world peace, and to show patriotism in a secure way. It can be seen that during the international tournaments, athletes from various nations are competing against each other in a sportive way. Although their countries of origin might be at war or conflict, but they shake hands and greet each others.  And during these moments, the sport people can show their nationalism by giving their best effort in the games, since they are the representative of their own countries.

On the other hand, although the tournaments positively affect the world peace, sometimes the athletes and the supporters get carried away with their emotions. In certain cases, several athletes had fought against each other because they could not manage their temperament, and the situation had triggered the supporters to fight against each other as well. As a result, it caused some tensions between countries as well. Therefore, many experts have suggested that athletes should be given proper explanation about controlling their emotions during the games, because it could give negative effects to the supporters and the relationship among nations.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that international sport & games such as the European Football Cup or SEA Games are effective tool in easing the tensions among nations, and to show the patriotism in the right way. I personally agree with the statement, but I think it is also important for the athletes to be trained about controlling their emotions.

( written by Darwin )

Sample Answer 2:
History has proved that people from each country had always been looking for some ways to response their patriotic emotions. So Over different eras, various ways have been taken to show these feelings. But these days, international sporting matches are considered as the best occasions for mentioned purpose beside their deep effects on improving international tensions.

Obviously no one can ignore that has no emotion about his country and traditions. Perhaps there is something in human nature which has encouraged him to show his interest of his culture to other nations. This tendency was one of the main reasons of many wars in the past when two nations fought each other to show their abilities and powers. But over last several decades, sporting matches has replaced those wars and people consider their nation sport team’s members as their country soldiers. In other words, people protect and encourage their nation sport teams to win the match and by this way, they response to their patriotic emotions.

However some international sporting festivals such as football world cup have become very popular occasions to satisfy mentioned instinct, they have had undeniably effects on international tensions. For example, during a football match between two nations, people from other countries obtain suitable information about those cultures, traditional and religious. Hence, it helps governments to have a proper background from each other. So it directly affects international relations and in most of cases makes a potential for countries to be more closed.

I think, therefore, people not only do pursue international sporting matches just as an entertainment, but they are interested in them because of other aspects of a sport match which relates to patriotic emotion and politics.

( written by Milad Rahimi)

Sample Answer 3:
International sporting events are always a source of attraction for everyone and a large number of people used to attend these events to express their love and support for their country. Many people argue that such occasions are mandatory for exhausting their hate and tension for their rival country. Others state that these events could boost up tension between countries and deteriorate their relation. I agree to some extent that such opportunities could be a menace to the people of nations.

It is often seen that people start fighting over supporting their country. Sometime situation goes out of control and causes lots of casualties. Many unbiased people are also hurt in these riots. This will end by leaving bad impressions of their country to the world.

However, events like football or cricket world cup provide opportunity to people to understand and explore about the cultures and norms of their rival country. They closely observed and spend time with each other. This will surely help in removing their conflicts and disputes to some extent.

In some cases, such as in football world cup 2014, after elimination of North Korea, the supporters of both South and North Korea supported South Korea by side lining their personal differences. This is the perfect example to demonstrate the worth of these events.

In conclusion, I believe that international events are not proved to be fruitful in lessening high temperature between nations. They seem to me more destructive and violent while supporting their teams. However, people could become normal by increasing the frequency of these events.

( written by Fahad Sultan )

Sample Answer 3:
No doubt, different types of international world cup games like the football, cricket, hockey, volleyball etc. are becoming very popular in many countries due to the fact that they think wining these international games are a prestigious matter.

However, it is considered that these international occasions can reduce the international pressure and it can be relieved the emotional patriotism in a safe way. While I accept this policy sometimes will not work properly, I believe it is one of the greatest ways to increase the good relationship with several countries.

One the one hand, there are some good reasons why the international game cannot minimize the universal problems of the different countries. Firstly, although the international games are very pleasant among several countries, only few countries can participate with these games. Finally, conflicts are happening with various countries when discrete cultured people watch the play in a same field. Therefore, it is fairly easy to comprehend that sometimes controversy is arisen.   

On the other hand, these international games open new avenues in the world that bestow an enormous amount of boons for different enemy countries in many ways. One important point is when the international play is occurred, the president of many countries goes to the spot for watching the games. This could result an opportunity to discuss about any issue between the foe countries. For instance, although Pakistan and India have several types of problem, in the World Cup Cricket they forget their internal trouble and they have only one target to win the world cup.

Another benefit is whenever the international sporting games are commenced, the whole people of the world look the games; as a result, the crimes are reduced dramatically in many countries. Thus, from these explanations it is clear that universal sporting games reduce pressure, and relieve the patriotism in a safe way.

In conclusion, it is clear that both sides of view have some logical points after the debate is explored. However, in my opinion, the tremendous advantages of international gaming occasions fortify my argument that it is auspicious for different countries.

( written by Abdur Rauf )

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0 # Adnan Zafar 2016-08-11 11:07
Very good.
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-2 # Ramesh Twari 2015-09-19 19:03
Essay Topic: Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

To what extent do you agree or degree with this opinion.

Sample Essay:
It is true that mega events like football world cup and other sporting occasions such as Olympics, IAAF, common wealth games have played crucial roles in improving diplomatic relation and surging patriotic attitudes. In this essay, I am going to discuss how these big and popular events could build better bonding among nations.

It is clear that sports entertain our mind. Due to this fact most people around the globe participate in some games and sports. People of the world are living a hectic life because of the busy and competitive world we have around us. They are not happy in most cases. They have problem of unemployment, increase in price of daily commodities, etc. They grumble against the government and fight in the society. These are the problems of all common people of the world. I believe, sporting occasions are the events that are cherished by many people around the globe.

In the same way, people have special interest when their country participates in international tournaments. You can see in Brazil as a country of football. When the world cup approaches, most people buy jersey, talk about their players and the whole country gets a different image. It means the Brazilian have a goal which is to win world cup. In this way, patriotic feeling develops among citizens.

Obviously, some sorts of international tensions will be in the world. But, mega sporting events decrease these problems. Not only global political leader watch big sporting events but also notorious fighters follow the game. There may be hostility among the countries but in the field they play as a peace ambassador of the country. In big sporting events people forget the hostility and become closer.

In conclusion, sporting events should be organised in the world throughout the year. It is the only one way to bring peace and prosperity in the world.
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+1 # Noor ul ain 2015-05-07 10:07
IELTS writing task 2 many sample sports event
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