IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 700 - Film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.

Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Some people think that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money and I also feel that is true. I totally agree with this thought. Let's discuss in details.

In today's world we can categorize above mentioned entertainers are the highest earners in the society. Their earning is much higher than most of the people. This difference also leads to create more poor people within the society. I will describe in my view why these high salaries are unfair.Firstly, entertainers are also doing their job as other people in the world. Each and every individual in work force are giving some support to make the national income in a country. Therefore it is unfair to pay very big salaries to fewer people. Furthermore payments should be done according to the job type, not considering about the popularity.

Secondly, these people earn much higher than well educated ones in the society like doctors, engineers, accountants. It is not the best thing as educations is not valued here. This will definitely discourage young people to be professionals. Thirdly, paying very high salaries to the film stars, sport stars or musicians makes much unfair situation to poor people who are working very hard to find a little money to live. Most of the government servants might not get good wages as government cannot arrange the money since entertainers are highly paid. We should not forget that these payment made by the government from everyone's money.

To sum up I also feel that entertainers are highly paid and I think these payment system should be done an intelligent and fairly way than this. I think salary scales must be designed very fairly than present. Wages might be plan considering various measures such as how hard is the job, educational level, profession. Moreover professionals like doctors, engineers, accountants, lecturers should be highly paid since it encourages society to be educated. But it is also should be in a balanced level.

[ Written by -  Ashesha Paveena ]

Model Answer 2:
Super stars of television, film and other media are given big amount of money and it has become controversial issue in the entire world. I am also in agreement with it and I would suggest that skilled workers also should be paid more. They are also real heroes of our societies. In the following paragraphs I am going to discuss some of the reasons why we should not give too much money to the starts only for their fame.

On the first place, in order to validate my thoughts, there are several reasons. The first one it is to be understood that if government and public give more money to the cricketers or to film stars, it may happen that they can use that money on wrong ways. Secondly, government should also understand that giving too much money to celebrities is good but whether they can use it for social good cause like education of children, charity works. For example, they can use it to ensure a good education to poor people.

Thirdly, also that stars having good publicity and they have their own business so it is possible that they would have enough money. Individuals should create a fund where so many celebrities can donate their money to poor people's food or housing related issues and also they must ask to assist from that stars and also if developed countries do this so it can be beneficial to undeveloped countries.

The other point of this essay is that to whom the government should give more salary? So I would mention that more and more skilled workers also should be given more money because they provide many facilities to the people. It has also seen that so many doctors, nurses and even teachers are migrating from undeveloped countries to developed countries to have better life and earn more. That’s why it may affect the economy of a country. The government should give them good salaries so they don't have to migrate to other countries.

To conclude, I would opine that celebrities should be given money but to some extent that should be restricted and they should be bound to take part in charity and social welfare related tasks so that we can use that fund on poor people as I have written above.

[ Written by -  Farhan Shekh ]

Model Answer 3:
It is a well-known fact that certain professions get paid more than others. Celebrities are especially known to receive high remuneration, which is sometimes argued to be too excessively high. Nevertheless, I agree that stars should be paid a large sum of money.

There are a number of reasons why this should be the case. Firstly, they will carry a heavy burden by being constantly under the spotlight. While there are those who enjoy such attention, living under public scrutiny can be quite stressful for others. On top of that, it is quite likely that they will have no privacy, even in regard to their personal lives. Therefore, there should be an equal trade-off in the form of money for those sacrifices. Besides, their appearances are often broadcasted all over the world. For instance, the movie they starred in might be screened at hundreds of cinemas. Thus, the movie earnings itself would be high, so it would only make sense that they get high pay for playing in it.

Even so, there are other professions that should also get high salary. One of these is the type of work that involves a great risk, such as miners who are at risk of being trapped inside a mine. In addition, jobs where people's health is at stake should also be rewarded with a reasonably high amount of money. For instance, doctors and psychologist who handle people's wellbeing or even lives, should obtain high pay. This is because it might be demanding and exhausting to work in such professions.

In conclusion, I agree that entertainers should be well-paid. On the other hand, other jobs that involve great harm or people's health should have relatively high salary too.

[ Written by -  Helen Lim ]

Model Answer 4:
It is certainly true that people in glamour industry as well as sports persons get a very high remuneration. However, I opine that occupations such as teachers, scientists, social activists, etc. must be paid a large amount as well.

There are myriad reasons to support this argument. Firstly, high endorsements to famous personalities would discourage the common people and they may develop negative thoughts about less paid jobs. This creates a deterring effect on society. Secondly youngsters become imaginatively affected and sometimes may be carried away from their actual goals. However, entertainers also face certain vexes; one among them is they can work for a limited age only (about 30-35 years) and they get retired earlier. Therefore it becomes essential for them to secure their further future for which money is required.

On the other hand, if we consider less paid jobs, for instance, the people in teaching field play a vital role because they lay down the foundation of children and in turn produce skill full citizens of a country. Moreover, Scientists indulge their valuable time in various discoveries and inventions to provide comfort to mankind. Furthermore, social workers bring awareness in the society which helps a country to develop. Owing to the above reasons, it is clear that people in the above mentioned fields are important for a common man and a society. Hence they must be highly paid.

In the conclusion, I believe that the jobs that deal with the betterment of denizens should not be ignored and they must be paid more so as to inculcate an interest in people to opt such fields. 

[ Written by -  Vishwa Rahul ]

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