IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 725 - Employing and exploiting animals for basic human needs is totally justified

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Many people think that employing and exploiting animals for basic human needs is totally justified while others opine that animals should not be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Nowadays, the destruction of animals is increasing at very fast pace. This has sparked a heated debate. Some people contend to use animals and consider their rights but others had notion of utilising them for their personal benefits. This essay would discuss the both the sides of the issue.

On one side, individuals should consider the rights of animals. Animals are also one of the living creature on this planet and have right to live freely. They do have the feelings and understanding of the relationships. For example dogs are considered to be loyal towards his owners and even some times sacrifices their life for the sake of protecting their owners’ life. Thus hurting them means creating curse for ourselves.

On contrary part, animals can provide the regardless benefits to economy and society of a country. Many people  does a business in the field of dairy farming ,poultry farming , making the shoes , bags from skin of animals ,meat industry and make good profits. Furthermore, animals are also involve in the sports these days. For instance horse riding, bull fighting are very common at present. As a consequences, all these contributing to the growth of the economy and satisfying the needs of human race.

To put it in a nutshell, although human cannot think about their progress without animals but the distortion of living creatures is seems unhuman. In my opinion, animals provide us unlimited resources without any cost. So we should utilise them in control way and restrict the killing. Ultimately, for the sake of humanity and get the valuable products for longer time we must provide them healthy and secure life.

[ Written by - Gagandeep Kaur ]

Model Answer 2:
One of the most controversial issues, these days is related to, how animals should be treated by individuals. Although, some people declare that we need only to stop hitting and killing the various animals around us, but I believe that a strict law by governments should be applied to save these creatures. An analyzed debate will be provided before a reasonable conclusion will be found in the next paragraphs.

Some People claims, that dealing with animals for a long time, help a sheer change in personalities and adopt inhuman attitudes. Also, some expert state that the only place where animals fit is research and experiment facilities. They also clearly say that farms are the perfect way to contain farming animals, so humanity can use them meat, milk and even leather.

They also argued that majority of fatal sickness generated by farming animals. For instance, take SARS as obvious example of that and how farming birds help spreading it.
On the other hand, the advocate of animal rights state, that we are dealing with poor creatures, which do not have the ability to identify the differences between good actions and bad one. In addition, childhood consultant trust that, majority of child violence actions children do against the younger children is related to copying parents actions towards farming animals. For example, a 7-years-old child killed his younger sister with axe copying what his father doing to them farming cheeps.

To sum up, this argument will last long until people and governments agreed that we have to keep these animals safe, as well as I agreed.

[ Written by - Walid Khalil Farag Amer ]


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