IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 827 - Government should put every effort to save the citizen from natural disaster

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Government should put every effort to save the citizen from natural disaster.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Undoubtedly, every year many humans' lives are jeopardized by the natural catastrophes. To protect them, individuals or organizations usually participate in assisting and sending aids to them. I firmly believe that the role of administration is more than the other parts because of accessing to more equipment, networks and taxes.

The first reason why governments should cover citizens' basic needs during natural calamities is that they usually access to better facilities. Definitely, availability of more human resources, medications or transportation can assist the state authority to be able to save more injured people's lives. For example, during tsunami occurred in the South Asia in 2003, the local governments burdened the duty of saving many citizens from death, far greater than the any private organization. Had not they saved humans, its mortality rate would have increased fundamentally.
The second reason is that administrations have a better networking. This means, few hours after disasters, governments can immediately contact and report to the international organizations and ask monetary or non-monetary assistance from them; however, no any other private society or individual has this level of potential.
Lastly, administration should spend the taxes paid by the on critical conditions. Clearly, only governments have a direct access to this financial resource, and this money should be considered for helping of dwellers hurt by calamities. This spending should cover food, shelter, medical expenses, house repairs, education or even paying temporary pensions.
In conclusion, citizens injured by calamities are better to be supported by their governments. I think they can have a better coverage due to accessing to more primary facilities, a better communication with worldwide organizations and tax resources.

[ Written by - Rambod Taghaodi ]

Model Answer 2:
In today’s modern world, we are constantly bombarded with the issue of natural disasters happening around the globe. Thus, some people assert that preventing the occurrence of natural disasters is merely the responsibility of government as they believe they can do nothing in preventing it from happening. Nevertheless, I think that cooperation between people and government is essential in protecting citizens from natural disasters.

Undoubtedly, government has the largest obligation to take the practical measures to prevent natural disasters from happening. They can, for example, employ the best scientists and geologists to predict the time of occurrence of disasters. By knowing when there will be a natural disaster, government can then take the effective prevention to mitigate the potential dangerous effects on human lives. To illustrate, to tackle the problem of tsunami which may cause severe death of inhabitants, government should allocate a portion of money to improve the current drainage system and to build barriers near the sea-coast. Thus, it is apparent that government has more power to lower the potential risks of natural disasters from happening and its effects to the citizens.

However, it is not to say that citizens have no responsibility to protect themselves from natural disasters. They can take little but could prove useful ways in dealing with this problem. For instance, parents should educate their children from young to behave well by not simply throwing rubbish into the drains and rivers which may eventually causes blockage. This kind of act is proved to be useful in preventing natural disasters like flooding. In addition, they should also take part in a campaign which gives information on what can be done by citizens in order to minimize the negative impacts of natural disasters on human beings. Although there are limited actions that an individual can take in dealing with this problem, the possible negative impacts on humans can still be reduced if every citizen plays their own part.

In conclusion, it is the responsibility of both government and individuals to mitigate the unanticipated impacts of natural disasters on human beings. I believe our nation will continue to prosper and flourish in the years to come and the citizens can be free from disasters.

[ Written by - Lee Wing Qeen ]

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