IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 878 - Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living.

To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Many hold on to this view that today mankind’s way of life is surrounded by a wide range of advanced facilities and that exerts profound impacts on the nature. I am of those individuals who strongly concur with this idea. In this essay, it is going to be assessed some effects resulting from modern lifestyle.

As the main issue which could stem from developing urban life, is that the communities increase the utilization of natural resources ranging from oil and gas to forests and water, to improve social facilities in the mega cities. By the way of illustration, some governments devise the plans to ascend the urban areas by deforestation projects. The second considerable plight is the fact that the technologic equipment cause widespread environmental pollution all around the world, which undoubtedly, the health of human being could be brought about those pollution. For example, in some big cities of the world the air pollution caused by automotives’ exhaust has been turned to the serious crisis.

As the third stumbling block of the advanced way of life, it could be noticed that, people are used to spend their time working with novel devices ranging from computers to smart phones and also video games. The side effect of such habits could negatively affect the families` relationships. As a result, the member of families, especially the youngsters would feel lonely even if they live together.

In conclusion, by all the reasons mentioned above, it undeniably seems that despite a variety of merits of developed lifestyle, human being suffer the difficulties organized from the modern changes. However, the adequate and integrated management could conduct the mankind to make the earth to a better place to live.

[ Written by - Behzad Babaei ]

Model Answer 2:
Many people believe that as the human standard of living gets better, it will have a negative effect to the environment. To a certain point I would agree with the statement, but it really depends on the method that we choose to improve our lifestyle.

It is a fact that some people choose to focus on improving the standard of living without any concern to their surrounding environment. As a consequence, many natural areas have been damaged and caused the extinction of some species. Moreover, cars, refrigerators, air-conditioners, room-heathers etc have improved the way we live our life on one hand and also caused environmental degradation on the other hand. Industrialisation, factories, large offices, luxury apartments, air travel etc are all part of our improved life style but yet they have many negative consequences to our environment.     

On the other hand, the public could not generalize a statement that says "the improvement of the living standard will have a negative effect to the environment". It really depends on how the government of each country handle it, as some countries are proven that they could manage both aspects simultaneously. For instance, Canada is known as one of the advance countries in the world, where as the living standard of its people is better than many other countries. And the government keep on developing methods, policies and procedures to improve the people's living standard. However, Canada is also known as one of the greenest country in the world, as the government is also concern about preserving the originality and biodiversity of its nature.

In conclusion, to a certain extent I would agree that the improvement of the living standard have affected negatively to the environment. But it happens in some countries, where as the governments have weak and unmeasured regulations. There are some countries who could manage between improving the living standard and maintaining the environment, and their way of governing should be reviewed and followed by other countries to make the world a better place.

[ Written by - Darwin Lesmana ]


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