IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 886 - Nowadays many people work part or full time from home

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Technology has revolutionised the way human beings go about their daily life. This is evident from the fact that many people nowadays work from the comfort of their homes. Some argue that this practice brings with its myriad of benefits, while others refute this. Both sides of this debate will be analysed in this essay before a reasoned conclusion is reached.

On the one hand, working from home can save an employer office rental costs to a great degree. For example, Sydney, Australia is one such place where the costs of renting an office space have risen to exorbitant levels in the past few decades. As a result, a large proportion of employers’ funds have to be devoted to this area, and this encumbers their ability to earn a decent profit. When looking at the discussion in this light, the merits of working from one’s home are clearly seen.

On the other hand, many contend that drawbacks of working from home outweigh its benefits. For instance, a recent British study found that majority of the people working from home had trouble meeting deadlines that were set by their organisations. This habitual lateness can lead to failure to the achievement of organisational goals. Thus, it is obvious why many people do not support the notion of working from home.

After pondering upon both sides of this argument, it is felt that working from home is much more of a positive development than negative. It is thus hoped that people and organisations will continue to reap the bounties of working from home into the foreseeable future.

[ Written by - Sameed Qureshi ]


Model Answer 2:
These days, there are a lot of people who do their work from home; either it is a part-time or a full-time job. People have argued about it, as some of them believe that working from home has many advantages while others do not agree with it. The following essay will discuss in details about it, but in some circumstances, I would agree if working from home some benefits for employee and employers themselves.

It is a fact that online and portable device technologies have changed the way people communicate, correspond and work. With these advanced technologies, people could open their email, browse the internet and even connect to their company’s system anywhere, as long as they are connected to the internet. As a result, many companies are offering some of their employees to work from their home nowadays, as they believed that working from home would give benefits for both parties. For the employers’ point of view, it would save the office rental space and electricity cost, as they do not have to provide desks and chairs for those who are working from home. While from the employee’s perspective, working from home give them flexibility in managing their time, and also save the transportation cost.
On the other hand, some people disagree with this condition, as they believe that working from home is not an effective thing. Firstly, they believe that having an eye to eye contact is an essential thing in improving the coordination and cooperation between superior and staffs or among working colleagues. Secondly, it is difficult for companies in controlling their employees who are working from home. And lastly, they think that employees who are working from home will find difficulties in doing their task, as they might get distractions from their children.
In conclusion, it is true that many people are working from their home nowadays. While some people believe that this condition brings benefits for companies and employers, others disagree with it. In my opinion, I think the best way for people to work is at their workplace as they could focus on their work, and also socialise with their working partners, but under some circumstances, we could work from home. For example, during the storm or flood, we could continue to be productive by working from our home.
[ Written by - Darwin Sugiharto]
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