IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 1129 - The rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty?

Use specific reason and example to explain to your answers. 

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1:
It is a fact that the gap between the wealthy and the poor is becoming wider these days as the high-class people get richer while the low-class is suffering more. The following essay will discuss the problems that might arise due to the inconvenience fact and solutions that could be addressed to resolve the issue.
 
The wide-range different of social classes in the society could cause a big problem for a country. When the elite classes get richer and the low-income get poorer each day, there is a risk of a social jealousy problem. This issue could be a threat to the country's stability, as there might be a lot of demonstrations done and even there might be a riot. One of the examples is about the French Revolution. During the Revolution, the gap difference between the rich and the poor was large and had cause a riot.
 
There are several things that the government could do to resolve the issue. Firstly, the government should make clear and proper regulations in terms of business practices. The government should ensure that there is healthy competition in terms business practices and ensure that there is no monopoly and nepotism. Secondly, the government should also provide some subsidies for the low-income people such as free health insurance, education and public transportation. The fund for these subsidies could be allocated from income taxes of the rich people. With these kinds of subsidies, it is hoped that the poor classes could improve their economic condition.
 
In conclusion, it is true that the rich people are getting richer while the poor classes are getting poorer these days. I believe that the government should have taken the issue seriously, as this issue could become a serious threat to the country.

[Written by - Darwin Lesmana]

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