IELTS Essay Topic:

Modern medicine helps to live longer.

Do you agree or disagree?

Model Essay:
There has been dramatic advancement in the field of medicine over the last few years. This has increased the use of medicine in people’s lives. Some people argue that modern medicine help them to stay healthy and active in long run. Others claim that newly developed medicines have great side effects and it could cause various diseases. I believe that one can be more healthy and wealthy by adapting natural ways to deal with their health problems.

Nowadays, a large numbers of people are addicted to different medicine and these medicines have become mandatory part of their daily routine. This help them to fulfill their task without any inconvenience, for instance, patients of asthma use inhaler in order to avoid breath issues. People, who are affected with diabetes, take insulin injection and drugs to maintain their sugar level.

However, natural activities such as exercise, walk and pure food are few factors that play pivotal role in improving people lives. People associated with sports activities, look younger and smarter than their peer group of the same age. In addition to this, deprive of such activities will make them lethargic and make them more susceptible to illness. That is why doctors and nutrients always emphasize on physical tasks and proper food respectively.

To sum up, I would like to say that modern medicine has significant affects on people health, it could be great source of curing illness but won’t be a compulsory reason for longer life. On the other hand happiness, smooth family, healthy food and extras curricular activities are few factors that have great influence on people longer lives.

[ Written by – Fahad Sultan ]