Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 92 - The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Line Graph + Bar Graph:

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» You should write at least 150 words.

                                   Visits to and from the UK

Line Graph 92 - Information about travel to and from the UK

IELTS Graph- Popular countries for UK residents to visit

Sample Answer:
The given diagrams show data on the number of international tourists who travelled the UK and the UK residents who travelled outside the UK from 1979 to 1999. The data also presents the countries where UK citizens travelled in 1999. As is observed from the given data, the number of international tourists travelling the UK kept on increasing after 1989 and more UK people travelled outside the UK than the number of tourists travelled the UK.

According to the first line graph, around 10 million international tourists travelled the UK and the number of UK residents travelled outside the UK was also just over 10 million. Both of these numbers kept on increasing gradually till 1986 and after that, the number of UK citizens travelling outside increased very sharply. The number of tourists the UK got kept on increasing and reached to over 25 million in 1999 while more than 50 million people travelled to other countries from the UK. The number of UK travellers who went to other countries was more than double than the number of people came to the UK for visiting.

The second bar graph shows the countries UK citizens travelled in 1999 and among them France was their most favourite destination where more than 10% tourists travelled in this year. The second most visited country by UK people was Spain where about 8% of total UK tourists travelled. Other countries visited by UK tourists were the USA, Greece and Turkey where less than 5% UK tourists travelled in 1999.

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0 # Subhash 2016-09-22 13:07
Very lengthy...
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-2 # Sumit Paul 2016-01-10 02:48
Hi.
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-1 # Hy 2015-10-02 02:54
It is not a good contrast but the comparison part is really good.
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+4 # Nima 2015-08-19 04:51
The presented graphs show the number of travellers to and from the UK in two decades from 1979 to 1999, and 5 most popular countries that British people visited, namely: Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain and France in 1999.
As is provided in the first graph, the proportion of people who visited from England was almost equivalent to British people who tripped to other countries which were 10 and 12 million respectively initially in 1979. After that, both of those groups swelled up momentously but the expansion of British travellers had more intensity than foreign people’s trend with gentle slope until 1986. In other scenarios after that year, the number of UK inhabitants who went to other countries rocketed noticeably and met 55 million as the peak in 1999 and other procedure amount increased and received 28 million in1999 as the summit. France had the most privilege than others with 11 million and Turkey was less favoured as a destiny for British person with 2.5 million visitors.

In conclusion gap between a number of visits aboard by UK residences and visits to the UK by overseas residents was very much especially after 1984.
On the other hand, French men and women had the most volume of travel to the UK.
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-7 # Azizbek 2016-07-06 23:15
In writing task 1 we should not write the conclusion. It reduces our score. Your score, I think, is 5.5 or 6.
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-3 # Sanaz 2015-08-13 13:56
Is this a band 9 score?
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+3 # Hi 2015-05-06 12:37
The given diagrams exhibit data on the number of international tourists who travelled the UK and the UK residents who travelled outside their country from 1979 to 1999. The bar graph data also presents the countries where UK citizens visited in 1999. As is observed from the given data, the number of international tourists travelling the UK kept on increasing after 1989 and more UK people travelled outside the UK than the number of tourists visited the UK.

According to the first line graph, around 10 million international tourists toured the UK and the number of UK residents travelled outside the UK was also just over 10 million in 1979. Both of these numbers kept on rising gradually till 1986 and after that, the number of UK citizens travelling outside increased very sharply. The number of sightseers the UK kept on climbing and reached to over 25 million in 1999 while more than 50 million people went to other countries from the UK. The number of UK travelers who went to other countries was more than double than the number of people came to the UK for visiting.

The second bar graph shows the countries UK citizens travelled in 1999 and among them France was their most favourite destination where more than 10% vacationists travelled in this year. The second most visited country by the British was Spain where about 8% of total UK tourists travelled. Other countries visited by the UK tourists were the USA, Greece and Turkey where less than 5% UK tourists travelled in 1999.
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0 # Aydan 2017-09-06 10:41
You should include overall in your writing task 1 and we have to write "overall," in order to improve our score.
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