Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 23 - Amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Column Graph + Line Graph:

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

» You should write at least 150 words.

Expenditure (Pence per person) on Fast Food, by Income Groups, UK 1990

Money spent on fast food per week in Britain

Consumption of fast food per person in gram in Britain.

Consumption of fast food in Britain per person (in gram).

Sample Answer 1:
The bar chart compares weekly expenditure of the British on three fast food items in 1990 while the line graph shows the consumption of these items from 1970 to 1990. Overall, expenditure on fast food varied based on people’s income and the pizza was the most consumed item in 70’s but in later years, consumption of fish & chips increased remarkably.

According to the bar graph, high-income class people spent more money on the hamburger (more than 40 Pence/person) than on fish & chips and pizza. Their spending was also higher than average and low-income class people on fast food. Average income class people also spent more on hamburgers but their spending on fish and chips (25 pence) was more than other two income groups. Finally, the low-income class British citizens spent comparatively less on fast food items and fish& chips cost them most (about 17 pence). They spent the least amount on purchasing pizza (around 7 pence/person).  

On the other hand, the line graph shows the consumption of these items by the British from 1970 to 1990. Initially, pizza consumption in Britain was highest (300 gm/ person) in 1970. In this year, less than 80 gm of hamburger and fish & chips were consumed by an average person. Over the time, pizza consumption declined and fish & chips became the most consumed item in 1990 with 500 gm consumption per person.

Model Answer 2:
The column graph shows how much money the British citizens spent on three fast food items based on their economic status in 1990 while the line graph reveals the consumption of these items during 1970 and 1990. Overall, rich British spent more on junk food than low-income class in 1990 and fish & chips became the most consumed junk food over the period.

It is interesting to note that, wealthy British spent more on hamburgers while less on fish & chips. They drained around 45 pence per person in a week for hamburgers while roughly 15-20 pence on other two items. Moderate income class prefered hamburger but spend approximately 33 pence on that. They spent the least on the pizza which amounted for nearly 12 pence. Low-income class, on the contrary, spent less on fast foods and they spent between 7 to 14 pence for each item, despite fish and chips being their most favourite.

According to the line graph, British citizens consumed pizza more than other two items. In 1970, consumption of pizza was 300 gm per person while it was less than 100 gm for other two items. Over the time, fish & chips became the most consumed fast food with 500 gm consumption. During this time, pizza became less popular while hamburger gained some popularity. 

Sample Answer 3:
The graphs present data on the money spent by British on fast food in 1990 and the consumption of three junk food items over 30 years. The expenditure is given for each person in a week in Pence while the consumption is presented in gram per person.

As is presented in the bar graph, in 1990, British people with high-income range spent more than 40 Pence in a week on Hamburger which was higher than that of other items. They spent only 16 pence/person on Fish & Chips while around 18 pence on Pizza. Again, Hamburger was the most popular item among the medium income class. They spent over 30 pence on this item while they spent only 25 Pence on Fish & Pizza and 11 Pence/person on Pizza. Finally, among the low-income group, the fish & chips was the most popular fast food item as they spend the highest money on this (17 Pence per week by an individual). Their expenditure on the pizza was only 6 Pence.

According to the line graph, people ate pizza than any other fast food in 1970. UK citizens, in this year, devoured more than 300 grams of pizza while the consumed only 100 grams of hamburger and fish & chips. The percentage of pizza consumption started declining and reached to only 200 grams on 1990. On the contrary, the popularity of the fish and chips reached to 500 grams in 1990. Finally, the consumption of hamburger also increased and reached to around 300 grams in 1990.

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The first sample is a 236 words essay. Who can write it in 20 minutes?
It should be "the British".
Alisha Rasaily
My writing is absolutely appalling. Also on the question, there's no mention of 'pence' or 'year', only on the sample question.
Alisha Rasaily
The diagrams illustrate data on fast food consumptions in Britain and the amount British spent each week based on their economic status in 1990. Overall, hamburgers were more popular among affluent Brits while fish & chips was a common fast food item for the low-income group people.As it is apparent from the graph, hamburgers were highly popular among rich British, and they spent 45 pence per person per week to purchase this item. Middle-class and low-income group British spent 33 and 14 pence respectively on this very item in a week. As for the average income group, a similar trend can be observed, although not merely the same. For them, hamburgers remained at the top with the expenditure of around 33 pence per week. In contrast, fish & chips were the most consumed ready food for the low-income group in Britain in 1990. They spent around 18 pence per person per week to have this item. It is worth noticing that, the richer the people, the higher they spent for fast food in Britain in 1990.
General information can be written in connected sentence in the introduction?
The column chart compares the amount of money British spent on three fast food items according to their income in 1990, while the line graph shows fast food consumption in grammes for two decades, to be exact between 1970-1990. A glance at the illustration reveals that rich British preferred Hamburger while the fish and chips became the most consumed fast food item in 1990's. As is presented in the bar graph, affluent population in Britain spent the highest amount for hamburgers which accounted for over 40 pence a person on an average in 1990. Average income people, on the other hand, spent more than 30 pence per person on that item while it was less than 15 pence for the low-income class British. Per pence expenditure of middle-income class in this year was higher than that of rich and poor British. On an average, less earning people spent less amount on fast food items in 1990. Finally, spending on pizzas in this year was fewer than that of other two items. According to the line graph, fish & chips and pizza was less preferred by British in 1970's and 1980's but after that their consumption skyrocketed. In 1990, 500 gm fish and chips were consumed in Britain against the 300 and 200 gm consumption of hamburgers and pizzas.
Waodo Eti
Good, I can understand your writing, and your writing is the only one I can understand!
You have forgotten to mention 'LINE GRAPH' in your writing...
Here no information about pence is given. Then why this word is continuously used.
Anzal Tehreem
The bar graph compares spending on British citizens on fast food while the line graph presents average consumption of three fast food items. Expenditure by high-income class people was more than twice on hamburgers (43 pence per person per week) than on fish and chips. For the latter two fast food items, their average expenses were less than 20 pence. Hamburgers remained the most favoured fast food item among average income earners who spent 33 pence per person per week followed by fish and chips (25 pence) and pizza (12 pence). Low-income earners spent the least on fast food, and fish and chips remained the most popular among them followed by hamburgers and then pizza. The given line graph shows the consumption of these three fast food items from 1970 to 1990. Fish and chips in 1970 were the most consumed item, 300 gm and that gradually decreased over the years till 1985 where it reached its lowest point, 200 gm consumption. After that, it tailed off after 1990. Pizza consumption was the lowest in 1970 but over the years, it still couldn't cross fish and chip's sale in 1990. Hamburger consumption in 1970 was slightly below 100 gm and took a dramatic leap starting from 1975 till 1990 leaving behind the other two fast food item. In 1990 the consumption of hamburger reached to over 500 gm which was highest among the consumption of given fast food items.