GT Writing Task 1: Sample 5 - For the past year you have been a member of a local club

IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.

Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter

  • state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
  • give details on how you have benefited from the club
  • explain why you want to leave

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write your own addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear .........,


Model Answer 1:

Dear Mr Martin,

I have been an exultant member of your club for more than 2 years. I first enrolled as a member in 2016 and next year my membership was upgraded to Silver Associate with a monthly fee of $50, paid every first Monday of the month. I regret to inform you that I can no longer continue my membership in the club as I will relocate to a different city soon.

This club has given me numerous benefits by providing activities, such as yoga classes that I am really fond of, as well as access to the gymnasium and swimming pool. Not to mention that there are always generous discounts on the food in the buffet restaurant. I have truly enjoyed my access to the library that helped me read many books.

Sadly, given my circumstances, I would have to discontinue my membership at this club. The reason is that I will soon be moving to another city. Thus, I would no longer be able to attend any activities held in this place. If I am not mistaken, my $250 deposit will be returned to me upon membership cancellation. Please advise should there be any particular form that I need to fill in.

Thank you. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Helen Kelly

[Written by Helen]


Model Answer 2:

Dear Mrs Watson,

I regret to inform you that I can no longer maintain my classic membership with your club from next month onwards. I am Andrew Scott, living a few blocks away from the club and have been a member since the beginning of its journey. I would request you to cancel my membership from next month. 

I paid my monthly membership fee online and it was £35 per month. Attached documents show my last six months' transactions to the club and all my transactions are paid in time.

This club is indeed a blessing to our locality as the community members did not have enough recreational facilities and just had a jogging track without any proper marking. But with the emergence of this distinguished club, they were benefitted profoundly. I personally gained from it enormously - I made some good friends, learned the rules of various games, took part in outdoor activities and last but not least, learned valuable skills.

With a heavy heart and immense regret, I am discontinuing my bond with this club due to my recent job transfer to the USA. I have no words to fill my sorrow over this decision, but I feel this is just the softest way to communicate my decision.

Sincerely yours,

Andrew Scott

[Written by Antony Andrew Scott]


Model Answer 3:

Dear Mr Brooke,

I regret to inform you that I have to discontinue my level 2 membership at your Golden Hook Fishing Club. I joined the Club a year ago and the benefits of the participation well exceeded the membership fee. I am hoping that you would help me finish the official procedure to cancel my membership.

I received numerous benefits from the club as a level 2 member. The roundtables and lectures of famous fishermen were absolutely brilliant. Moreover, discounts on the equipment in sports gear shops was a money saver. Last but not least, your monthly illustrated magazine was a precious treat for me.

Unfortunately, I have to move to France next month because of my father's health condition. I must acknowledge that continuing the membership of your Club is no longer an option for me as I will be leaving London soon.

I have paid my monthly fee using my credit card and its details could be found in your database. I request you not to charge me any membership fee for the next month. I am ready to fill in the membership cancellation form at your office next Monday.

I wish every success of this club and its members.

Yours sincerely,

John Philip


Model Answer 4:

Dear Mr Robinson,

I have been a member of your fitness and wellness club for the last 2 years. I have been immensely benefitted from my membership but unfortunately, I can’t continue it because of my broken legs. I am hoping that you would allow me to cancel my membership effective from next month.

I joined the club in September 2016 and I enjoy the gold membership which charges me $45 per month. With my membership, I am allowed to use the gym, yoga classes, and physicians' advice. I have paid all of the membership fees in time using my Visa Card and I really am satisfied with your the benefits the club offers to its members.

Unfortunately last week, towards the end of my work, I slipped and fell on a wet floor and broke my leg. It was a severe accident and the doctors did surgery on my leg. According to the doctor's advice, I should not take part in any form of exercises until I fully recover. Considering the situation, I cannot continue my membership at your club for at least 4-5 months. So, please cancel my membership and I hope to return to your club once I feel fit for that.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Milad Rahimi


Model Answer 5:

Dear Mr Nielsen,

I am writing in regard to the cancellation of my membership at the Philippine Society of Mechanical Engineers club. I have been a platinum plus member since 2010 and received numerous benefits. I have decided to cancel my membership as I will migrate to Australia soon.  

This club has been a great help to me. As a member, I have learned many things through seminars conducted by the society. I have also meet professionals within our group and received useful career advice from them. My payments are up to date and I enclose a copy of my payment records which I made through an affiliated bank.

With regards to my decision to leave the club, a year ago I applied for residency in Australia and last week I received the approval visa. Under this circumstance, I have to cancel my membership as I will leave the country next month.

I now seek your accreditation as I am interested in joining a similar group in Australia, and they might ask for a reference. I might, therefore, request a reference from you in the near future.  

Thank you in advance and my best wishes for the society and its members.  

Yours sincerely,

Joel Calderon

[ Written by - Joel ]




IETLS GT Writing Task 1 / Letter Writing Topic:

For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.

Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter

    » state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
    » give details on how you have benefited from the club
    » explain why you want to leave

Write at least 150 words.
 

Model Answer 6:  

Dear Mr Hansen,

I joined the 'Sports and Social Club' as a full-time student member in 2016. Since then I have paid the monthly membership fees directly to the National Kingshill bank in due time. I have been immensely benefitted from this club but I regret to inform you that I have decided to cancel my membership effective from 1st November.

I have thoroughly enjoyed my membership as it has provided me with useful opportunities to meet up with other young people and participate in a number of social activities. I have also been fortunate enough to play in some of the inter-club tennis tournaments and have taken advantage of the various classes available such as Yoga and T'ai chi.

However, my studies are now coming to an end and I will shortly be returning to my home country, possibly in November. I regret that I no longer can continue my membership in the club. I would be grateful if you help me complete the official procedures to cancel my membership.

I wish every success of the club and its members and organisers.

Sincerely yours,

Alister Book


Model Answer 7:  

Dear Mrs Watson,

I am a full-time Gold member of your club 'Fitness Shield'. My membership started a year ago, on 5th August 2017 and it is valid for another six months. I have paid all my dues including the security deposit of $250 using my saving account with City Bank. Now I would request you to cancel my membership and refund me the amount after deduction of the next three months' fees.

Not to mention, your well-equipped club has offered me enormous benefits so far. The wide range of sports and fitness activities have helped me regain my lean body shape again. The instructors were very professional and with their help, I have found a perfect and healthy diet. The outdoor activities were phenomenal and the lawn tennis coach taught me how to play one of my favourite sports.

It is a regret that I am bound to cancel my club membership from 1st December. I have recently been transferred to Edinburgh and I am left with no choice but to move there at the end of November. I would, therefore, request you to cancel my membership and refund my security deposit and any fee left after the deduction. Kindly deposit it to the bank account number 1123456, Barclays Bank, Oxford Street, London.

Thanks for such a great club and I wish every success of it.

Yours sincerely,

Emma Fiona

[ Written by - Rahul Choudhary ]


Model Answer 8: 

Dear Mr Garner,

I would like to express my gratitude to the local yoga club which you designate as a secretary. I immensely enjoyed my association with the club and the benefits I had received from being a full-time member for a year is immeasurable. However, due to my transfer to a new office, which is in a different city, I want to cancel my membership.

Not to mention, when I first enrolled at the club as an amateur with no knowledge of Yoga, I was fascinated by the talented and friendly instructors. I had paid Rs 2000 as a monthly fee for the first few months at the club's front desk. Then I subscribed to the full-time silver member and paid Rs 3500 per month in cash. I now possess a good health, not to mention the changes in my attitude and personality, thanks to the club and the people behind it.

With regret, I would like to inform you that I have been transferred to Mumbai and I can no longer continue my association with the club. Please accept this letter as a formal notification for the cancellation of my membership.

Once again I thank you and the people behind this fabulous club.

Yours sincerely,

Prasadarao Talluri

[ Written by - Talluri ]


Model Answer 9:  

Dear Mr Anderson,

I am writing to inform you that I have decided to discontinue my membership with the 'In-Shape Fitness and Sports Club' effective from 1st September 2018. I owned a basic membership and received numerous advantages from it. Now I am seeking your cooperation to cancel my membership.

I joined your club on 2nd July 2017 as a basic member and thoroughly enjoyed my association with such a wonderful club with astounding instructors who are highly skilled and friendly. I have always paid my monthly fee using my Visa Credit card issued by NIFC Bank.  

My primary objective to join the club was to improve my tennis skills. I have always enjoyed watching tennis competitions and wanted to play it. But I wanted to learn from an expert and your club was the excellent one to fulfil my dream. On top of that, your staff members were very welcoming and the instructors have improved my skills to an extent that I won the intercity tournament held in January 2018. I think it would not have been possible if I had not joined the club.

Unfortunately, my company has recently asked me to relocate to a different city. Even though I would have loved to come to the club, I, unfortunately, cannot do it due to the distance.

You can send me a confirmation letter of my membership cancellation to This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it.. All my payments are up to date and I will pay my membership fee up to August 2018.

Yours sincerely,

John White

[Written by - John]

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+1 # Kulbhushan 2017-08-09 13:51
Letter writing topic:
For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.

Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter:

- state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this.
- give details of how you have benefited from the club.
- explain why you want to leave.

Answer:
Dear Sir/Madam,

I regret to inform you that I will no longer be able to continue my membership with your club despite my great love for this club.

I want to cancel my membership from your Gymkhana club because I am moving to the USA, at the beginning of the next month. I have spent some golden days with this association. It has changed some aspects of my life because I have got wonderful experience after becoming a part of the club. It enhanced my personal skills, leadership skills and made me some good friends who have extraordinary personality and skills. I had been a silver member, which is a basic membership type and I paid my fees with my credit card. I have even paid the next three months membership fee that I do not expect any refund.

I will join a company in the USA and I am planning to move there in the next 10 days. Thanks in advance. I wish that the club achieves a huge success.

Sincerely,
Kulbhushan
Member ID No. - SV-14587.
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+10 # Chaitanya 2016-02-22 04:16
Dear Mr. Secretary,

Greetings! I am writing this letter to convey my message that I wish to discontinue my membership with Classic Yard Coral Club. I am Chaitanya, have been living in 72, Vincent Road for the last 5 years. My membership number with the club is TR-5478.

Since January 2013, I’ve been a premium member with your prestigious club. Every year I pay the membership fee of $700 through online payment and Cheque books. please find the enclosed fee particulars accompanying this letter for your kind reference.

I was really excited about participating in all sports like cricket, volleyball, table tennis and chess tournaments throughout my span of five years. I also enjoyed the social activities this club had arranged. This was an excellent opportunity for me to make some good friends. I also improved my health consciousness being part in all fitness activities conducted by your club.

I have been working as an Executive Manager in Life Cell limited, located in Birmingham. Recently I got promoted to a Senior Manager and was transferred to Manchester branch. So I decided to shift near the office from next month.

Finally, I would like to know the procedure and document requirement for my membership cancellation. I am very thankful to my co-participants and club managers for giving such a fantastic experience in my life.

Thanks and Regards
Chaitanya.
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+1 # Mira 2015-12-03 12:52
Dear Sir/Madam,

Over the past years I was honoured to be a silver member in your great club. My membership number is 123556 which was paid in cash on Friday, October 21, 2015. Unfortunately, I have to cancel my membership starting next month because I had a job offer in Canada so I am leaving the country within the next few weeks. However, I really had a great time enjoying the club facilities, especially the pool and the tennis court where I had the chance to get swimming classes. Besides, I will never forget the relief I had during yoga classes.

Thank you very much for your kindness and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
Mira Yad.
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+2 # Nima 2015-06-13 04:13
To: Mr Alavi,
The secretary of Activate Local Club.

I am Nima, have been a silver member of your club for the last one year. I am writing this letter to express the fact that I want to discontinue my membership due to some emergency and urgent reasons.

Your club is one of the best clubs in this region and I've found many friends from this club. Apart from that, the activities this club offers are quite superb. I am really satisfied with your services, especially when I got a silver card. Your exercises and training are very good for me and I had been able to lose 7 pounds in 3 months. The sporting activity and skill development programmes are other two great initiatives by the club and I have been immensely benefited from both.

As a silver member I have paid my membership fee through your online service with my credit card. I paid the whole year's fee in advance at the beginning of this year. However, due to my work, I will need to move to a different city and I would be staying there for at least 6 months. I, therefore, would not be able to continue my membership with your club from the coming month.

I would, therefore, request you to cancel my membership and refund the remaining months' membership fee that I paid in advance. I will always proudly tell others about this club and wish all the best for all the staffs and members of this club.

Yours sincerely
Nima Mirabedini.
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+3 # Aran Ruth 2014-02-20 22:05
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