Letter Writing # 159 - You want to move to the college accommodation

IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are a college student in an English speaking country. You share a rented apartment with others but want to move to the college accommodation instead.

Write a letter to the teacher in charge of the hostel and explain your intention to move to the college accommodation. In your letter:

- Introduce yourself
- Give reasons why you not happy with current accommodation
- Explain why you think the college accommodation will be better for you

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir,


Sample Answer:

Dear Sir,

The purpose of inscribing this missive is to inquire about the availability of any vacant room to stay in your hostel. I am facing many obstacles with my current accommodation and would like to stay in our college hostel instead.

I am Neha Sharma, have enrolled in ‘Master of Education’ in your esteemed college two months ago. I am an immigrant from India and before emigrating here, I arranged to stay with a family through a private accommodation agency. Unfortunately, this accommodation is stumbling stone in my studies because it is far from the college that consumes a great chunk of my time to commute. Moreover, the food, which I think is not even palatable, coat me a huge money per week. I belong to a middle-class family; therefore my stay here is heavy in my pocket.

Resultantly, I want to move into the college hostel due to multifarious benefits. Firstly, it will spare my time of travelling and I can devote my time to my studies. One of the best things is that I can learn, discuss topics and ideas with my classmates and socialize. Last but not least, I can eat healthy food as your mess imparts Indian food as well as affordable stay for me.

Hope you will consider my predicament and issue me a room as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,
Neha Sharma

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