IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 641 - Developed countries often give financial aid to developing countries

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Developed countries often give financial aid to developing countries, but it does not solve poverty so developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

Do you agree or disagree?

What other kinds of aid could be provided to those countries?

You should write at least 250 words.


Sample Answer:
Developed nations are often seen providing economic assistance to the third world nations. However, it does not always help in reducing poverty and therefore it is argued that less affluent nations must be provided with an alternatives form of aid. This essay discusses why poor countries can be better off from such assistance and types of help that can be offered.

One of the main reasons why developing nation should be assisted in other ways is because money can solve problems only for the temporary period. It is not a long-lasting approach to tackling poverty. To illustrate, a developed nation can build schools for poor nations but the expenses that incur later in regards to student's fees and teacher's wages may force to close the institution. This is because foreign aid may not be able to support for longer periods. Thus, it is highly essential that developed countries should find alternatives when helping the poorer nations.

There are different kinds of aids that affluent nations can provide to address this problem. First and foremost, young people could be given necessary training in various fields such as technology, modern agriculture, teaching, technical skill, communication etc. This helps them to find employment in their own countries or they can apply jobs to other rich nations. Another important option is investing in prosperous and promising sectors in the poor nations. If first world nations such as the USA opens its companies in third world countries like India, Pakistan, Nepal etc. many people can be highly benefited as such industries can create many local jobs.

In conclusion, there are many advantages if rich nations can provide alternative forms of aids instead of capital because financial support is only the short term approach to tackling the issue. In future, it is suggested that such new approaches need to be continued.

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Gyan Prasad Sapkota
Developed countries often give financial aid to developing countries, but it does not solve poverty so developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

Do you agree or disagree? What other kinds of aid could be provided to those countries?

The deprivation of fundamental needs has been rapidly growing in poorer countries. Most wealthy countries think that they need to help financially as much as possible to secure destitute countries from the inevitable economic crisis and crumble. In this essay, I will explain why solely providing money might not function well and, yet rich nations need to show pragmatism.

The major attribute, through which developed countries could assist poor countries, is academic aid. If the rich governments allow high numbers of students from developing countries to study for free and then train them and send back them to their countries, the undeveloped countries would have potential and possibilities in the future. For instance, a girl from our town in Syria had studied and graduated from Harvard University, and as she returned to her home country a few years ago, she started a new journey with free education in her town. Therefore, it is certain that education could help the county in sustainable ways.

Furthermore, financial aid can be less helpful due to mudslinging corruption and bad policies by politicians. There is no denying that undeveloped countries have corrupt legislators and do not have proper plans for the utilization of resources. Countries such as Nigeria and Haiti, for example, have been receiving an enormous amount of money from the international communities, however, none of them has been able to properly utilise the resources and get out of the curse of poverty. In addition, poverty and starvation can not be solved without long-term development, education and employment. So, it is clear that rich nations can help those poor countries, more profoundly, by creating more jobs and educating them.

To conclude, due to political and social problems, money alone is not the best possible help for poor countries. I believe, financial aid has not been effective so far. Moreover, educational assistance could improve those countries conditions significantly.

Soniya
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