IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 722 - International tourism and international trade are two important aspects

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

International tourism and international trade are two important aspects of the development of the economy of a country and a country can get numerous benefits from the close relationship it maintains with foreign countries.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Model Answer 1:
Today, the majority of the people travel in different countries as part of their work, travel or living. But the fact is whether it bring a benefit to society or not? I would like to share my opinion in the following paragraphs.

Firstly, as people start travelling to different places, they communicate with the local people, which make it possible to understand each other and lead a good relationship. This relationship may help to bring a good understanding and bonding among the nations. Moreover, as the number of tourists increases, tourist resorts also increases, revenue collection will be increased, which reduces the burden of government barring all the expenses of the maintenance. The economic level of a country will be in a control. This not only provides financial support to the government, as a number of accommodation centre increases, need for employee also increase as a result.  The problem for unemployment can be solved, which helps in making a powerful and developed economy.

On the other side, most of the nations have their own tradition and culture. This difference is major in countries where fewer foreign tourists come to visit when compared with other countries where a large number of tourists travel and stay each year. This may create a serious issue in some places where the tradition is on the upper side. For example; the dressing style of western country differs from our nation. When they visit a sacred place such as temples, mosques or some other pilgrimage places may create some inconvenient situation for the locals. Sometimes, the situation may become worst which may result in future conflicts among the nations.

To sum up with my words, despite the drawbacks in the above paragraph, the international tourism helps to a greater extent in forming a nation and to lead a peaceful, friendly relationship among them and making the planet earth a meaningful one.

[ Written by - Vinuth K.N ]

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+1 # Kavery 2016-04-17 06:31
Essay Topic: International tourism and international trade are two important aspects of the development of the economy of a country and a country can get numerous benefits from the close relationship it maintains with foreign countries.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Model Answer: In this epoch of globalisation, trade and tourism are omnipresent. These international relationships are beneficial for both the host and the reservoir countries. Even though there are some drawbacks, this essay supports the view point that a country gets numerous benefits from a close relationship it maintains with other countries.

It is often said that the international ties a country maintains sometimes, destroy the tradition and custom. For instance, because of Western cultural impact, most of the youth in India follow the Western dress code and forget the traditional values. Secondly, brain draining is a common phenomenon and developing countries that are lacking the trained professionals are suffering from this problem even more as most of their talented individuals are being migrated to developed countries. Thirdly, local trades have lost its popularity whereas the followers of branded international products drastically increased.

On the other hand, for developing countries, tourism is a prominent source of revenue. In addition, international relationship strengthens the understanding among nations. Moreover, the living standard of nations has improved by the demanding job opportunities around the world. Travelling in different countries enlightens the cultural aspects of a nation and reduces the language and cultural barriers nations have. Furthermore, international trade paves the way for the local people to purchase branded products from their own local shops. People can travel to other countries for better treatment and get ideas. Thus the possibility of international tourism and international trade offers immense opportunities to a country.

In conclusion, international tourism and trade bring the whole world under one umbrella. I hope in imminent future cultural and regional barriers will be diminished and the international friendly relationship will be strengthened toward a better world.
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