IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample 1130 - Education and health care should be funded by the government

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1: (Agree)
Education and health care are two essential aspects of human life. Without proper education and health care system, no nation can develop. It is the responsibility of the government ensure quality education and health service to its citizens and I strongly agree with this view.

To begin with, according to the “National Sample” survey of India in 2015, people had to spend more than one-third of their wages on health care and schooling. In a developing country, it is quite hard for citizens to manage it all by their own, especially since education and treatment are getting expensive these days. These should be free as poor people cannot afford the higher education and good health care system. Moreover, if the government provides free education, the literacy rate will surely increase and the citizens would contribute far better to the overall development of the country. So, in this way, the economy of that country will flourish day by day.

In addition, another recent survey in India shows that almost 32% people die every year without proper treatment because they are poor. Furthermore, a healthy nation is the base of an industrial nation and it is a government's responsibility to make the proper medical treatment and service available for all.

In conclusion, if education and medical facility are provided by the government for free to its citizens, then a country will get more benefits from it. Education and healthy life are two basic needs of every citizen and a government is in fact, formed to make sure no citizen is deprived of his basic needs.

 

Sample Answer 2: (Agree to a certain extent)
Some people believe that a government should provide free education and medication for the residents. To a certain point, I would agree with the idea, but I also believe that everybody should be responsible for his own education and health condition.
 
For a number of reasons, some believe that education and healthcare should be funded by the government. To begin with, most of the people fulfil their tax obligation, and they should definitely get some benefits from the government in the form of free medication and education for their children. It is a fact that education is an essential factor for the development of a country. By providing free education to the residents it is hoped that more skilled and educated workers would be created. These potential workers will definitely boost the country's economic sectors.
 
A group of people, however, disagree with the idea of providing free health service and education to the public. One of the reasons is that free medical service makes some people irresponsible of their health condition. It is believed that expensive health care would force people to follow a strict life style and quit smoking and drinking. They also opine that private fund for education makes schooling system more effective as guardians are more conscious of taking care of their children's learning. For instance, many private schools are doing better in developing countries than the state funded schools and parents active involvement made the difference.
 
To a certain extent, I support that a government should provide free education and medication to people. But I also believe that people should also be responsible for their own life.

[Written by - Darwin Lesmana]

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